I Need a Doctor

[TreTru]

I did this for a contest im in on a different site..Just tryin to get some feedback..

I'll go dig up my last few feed links if i gotta..but i know ive been leavin feed so ...

HahaHa @ no one even droppin yet..its funny



well since i went thru all the trouble of doin this i may as well drop it..



i was just gonna drop the first verse but got into the concept so i kept writing..and since homeys DQ'd anyway i may as well drop the extended version...

didnt quite come out to my vision cause in my vision im not the one on the second verse..

FYI you can peep my Soundclick as i just uploaded a version with an empty second verse for colabo purposes...so if you like my first verse and can write a better second Verse please be my guest...

so according to the stips Here it is Produced by Dr Dre "I need a Doctor" feat.Tre Tru



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so now you need a doctor? a Doctor?
when all thru most of ya lifes traumas.. ive been like ya armor
protecting you and slaying all the demons that could harm ya
feelings til a cold shell, grows .. where your soul hails..

cause thats where secrets go i know you know i wont tell
i gave you bliss from our first kissed at the hotel....
you said you loved the way i caused your BPM to raise
even joked to ya friends called it ya skippin dinner phase

had you in a daze releasing endorphines in ya brain
when ya lost ya moms i helped you forget ya inner pain
we started on High..you and i always entertained
and now you say you cant survive without me in a day

you promised in blood now things have never been the same
acknowledged ya love from when you put me in ya veins..
even a doctor. couldnt start ya.. forgettin me
youll always love me sinfully ya lover meth Amphetamine..


HOOK++++

So now The Doctors in .. please sit and talk with him...
from what i see i think you... may need some oxygen
a psychologist to help asses ya mental stress
a toxicologist ..it looks like you been on a binge.

what id suggest is rest but go ahead we can begin
not really sure bout where youve been but yes i know ya friend
im here to help ...you say things have been Hard for ya~
cant blame yaself... lifes dealing the wrong cards For ya~

but life aint over yet things could change in the stars For ya~
try to be glad cuz rehab will change it all for ya~
i am the doctor and i can see your dead inside..
i'll be your iron lung help you get the breath of life

pik you up on ya feet and get you to a better life
slay the demons in ya mind til none are left to find
it takes time keep pushin forward never movin back^
it could be 10 years... like Dre's newest Track


-- Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:44 pm --

[Sir Kevin O Shea]

This is proper, very proper.

[Defiance]

yo man i liked this

the story of addiction and pain.. as well as the outward perspective of a friend watching someone fall off the planet


nice man keep it up

[TreTru]

Good Looks on the feed guys..umm thats way better than i expected as i feel it fell way short of what i expected..
i'll prob get somebody on that second verse..

[ScottJames]

it was okay... the beat drowned ur rapping IMO... thank god for posting the lyrics, LoL first verse was much better

[TreTru]

it was okay... the beat drowned ur rapping IMO... thank god for posting the lyrics, LoL first verse was much better

^^^
Now thats real!!your right..i really like the first verse if not for that i'd juss trash the effort but i think its got potential..another reason why i'd hope to get someone else on the second verse..thnx for bein honest..1

[aglazey132]

this is a cool song man i like the topic. what site where you in a contest on?

[Audible Thought]

this is dope, great presence and delivery. the mixing is done well too very good job.

Keep at it!

[TreTru]

@Al this is on BBE .. its been a big ho show fest so far..tho..

@Audible good to see you around bro..thnx for the feed...1