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new trakk up on my www.reverbnation.com/pestofwurdone called crushin.
im 1st third and hook. dude on second verse named k.stone.... his first time on the mic.

raw vocals. no mixing really done besides vocal levels

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: crushin

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Pest your verse was dope wasnt really feeling the chours but an overall OK drop


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Re: crushin

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fed ya shit.
anymore feed? will return the favor

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: crushin

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Yo, your verses were absolute fucking fire, dude. Wish I could fuckin collab with ya, on the same tip. The beat is fire as fuck, I felt the fuck outta it, and props for the Illest shoutout. Chorus didn't really do anything for me, and I under stand K. Stone's plight about being new to the mic, but I didn't feel any of what he said. Just being real. Delivery and timing was whack as hell on his part. He'll learn, though. Overall, a nice drop, and, during your verses, a pleasurable listening experience. Stay up.

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Re: crushin

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yeah thanks man means alot. he new to the mic, and all besides the first two bars he free styled so i gotta give him some credit. i thought he did exceptionaly well for not having experience and me just tossing him on it. he a work in progress tho...

and ill feed that beat soon as i hitta computer

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: crushin

Post by Kause mc »

bumpin it as i type bro..

ummm.. chill beat man! i like that..
your flows comes NICE! wow your
voice suits it down pat...
this is the first track ive listened
to of yours..
great first impression if i say so
myself lol..
cool hook man. the "HEY"'s are cool

all in all mad drop props to
k.stone too. didnt feel him tooo much
but he kept his own..

stay up bro
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Re: crushin

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yeah thoses heyyys are the first time i really dropped something that mainstream inna track

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: crushin

Post by thadevious1 »

I think this was a decent track
you got skills
and overall this sounds like it's ready for an mixtape
you got some nice punches and imagery

your man wasnt bad but you're a in a other league

keep up 'n keep droppin gems

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Re: crushin

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I like ya verse, vibed really well with the beat...The energy and lyrics are what grab me the most...You also got a lil swag in ur flow too which is coo...I enjoyed ur verse a lot, the chorus is ok, but could use some wrk..Overall nice drop..
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Re: crushin

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yuhhhhp any more dees??

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: crushin

Post by Grim »

i really enjoyed your verse...your voice suits your style well...if i had to pick on something i'd say your verse in spots sounded forced but you were cramming alot of syllables in there so props for sure...nice and smooth overall and a nice beat for the emotion of the song....not much negative to say..nice vocab and some dope lines for...just be careful not to lose the effect of your punchlines over stuffing your verse....really good stuff though overall
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Re: crushin

Post by M33Kish »

Sick beat, nice hook, BAD 2nd VERSE!!!!!! MAAAN do me a favor and take dude out so i can BANG THIS SHIT WITHOUT BEIN LOOKED AT SIDEWAYS!!!!! but anyways dope shit man, your flow was pretty sketchy at times but it kinda sounded cool so i guess thats just your style, anyways i like it, keep it up man... did you make this beat?
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Re: crushin

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no that beat is justa sound click beat...
me and dude were shit faced recording it.
im in the process of tryna find the sample used to i can
fukk with it...

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Catastropic wrote:i went to ya site on reverbnation, and i heard ya' projects bro, i must say they real damn good...
at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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