working on a new project, Just Premiered Volume 2, where i rap on Just Blaze / DJ Premier beats
here's the first track i recorded for it
http://snd.sc/liQlIp
left feed for a few people, couldn't hear a lot of peoples' tracks though
Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
Rode the beat nice playa, liked the lyrics for sure.
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
Your lyrics are sick, very well though out, very streamline and technical...When it comes to the delivery although not bad at all, I would rather a lil more swag to it, just because using these technical words and then adding a lil flavor, makes the listener a lil more intrigued, like not only is he skilled but he's doing this effortlessly...the track overall was very good, gotta collab wit ya sometime, wat topics do u usually make?
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
Dope stuff man...multies, wordplay...delivery...a lil swag, so far I like all your drops
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
Was pretty dope.
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at ya' age you have a 5star skillz,
and believe you're gonna make in the music biz.
i love ya' sht...most definitely...
keep up the good work bro!
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
This shit is nice as fuck.
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
To Me, This Was Ok. . .Not The Best, But Not The Worst. I Think What Hurt You The Most Here Was Your Delivery. The Rhymes Were Inconsistent. Matter Of Fact, The Only Ones That Were Consistent Were The Inner Multies. They Were Nice, I'm Not Gonna Lie. I Think You Got That Locked, But Your Flow/Delivery Was Just Too Undefined To Really Get A Good Feeling From This Track. Quality Is On Par, As Well As Energy.
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Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
thanks for the feed guys
Re: Daniel Aliff - Charge Me (10 Crack Commandments)
damn.... that track screams NEW YORK haha.... very east coast... lyrics were nice as hell man... good shit fam
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