Leave me some feedback, I'm eager to improve!

[Evans]

Drop me some constructive criticism on my first tune 'The Taster'
Peace!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B5sOYIEng2E

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[Livenlearn]

Yo, I really like this, Um first issue tho, either u panned everything all the way to the right or recorded this in stereo in stead of mono, but once u get that fixed this will be a quality track, I enjoyed the lyrics, the flow was on point, a couple clever lines, and it was sounded natural towards the middle so nice wrk

[Alvin]

I am pleasantly impressed by this song of yours. I think last one i heard it was you in a car. The lines like stated above are rather clever, and your delivery is solid. I really have no complaints on this. To be completely honest, I played with the volume in each speaker, and you were coming through the middle. Not so much panned but the dubs in gone at the very end. Solid drop man.