McNasty Murked!

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Re: McNasty Murked!

Post by Alvin »

First and foremost, a better Microphone is a no brainer. For being a one track take, no dubs, no layers, nada, its decent. Some of the rhyme schemes are a little basic. It almost feels like you wrote this in sections, and spit it in sections, cuz the crossovers are a little ify. Get better quality and do more than one hollow layer and you'll be alright man. Drop more audio. LAYERS ARE YOUR FRIEND
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i liked it, even tho the sound quality wasnt great but it sounds real, i
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Re: McNasty Murked!

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flow is way off......quality is also bad.......but i think if you had a condensor mic and a dubb on top it would add pressence the vocal was also pretty loud 2.....maybe not use as much gain when you do your compression
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Re: McNasty Murked!

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First of all the beat is dope.. u still got it tho u mad rusty.... i heard better from u so i take this as a lil something to see what u sounded like. Nevertheless if you gonna diss u gotta come a lil better than that. Tho i still have to give u props for recording. Big Ups
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Re: McNasty Murked!

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Dude, you're fucking gay. I could put up a better track with a kid having down syndrome as my spokesperson... This is what we waited months to hear? Lame ass fuck, you aint shit... Dont ever try to diss me and come with something this fucking wack again... All talk, no bark... Fuck boy status...
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Re: McNasty Murked!

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lol, this was iight i guess. THe flow was off alot of the time and the quality is horrible. ANd its damn short for a diss track, with no real punchlines.

The beat is nice tho
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Re: McNasty Murked!

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yeah its off ..but the beat evened it out
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