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Murk McNasty - My Life
Ive posted to quite a few audios over time... Heres the one I went to a studio(first time) that had some quality beats and a sick system. I know the flow is cramped a little and the wording can be off, but over-all what does everyone think?
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Re: Murk McNasty - My Life
MY LIFE!..
niiicce homie. quality is smooth.
chorus is cool got my head bobbing
beats nasty
very solid man lyrics were on point, there was a couple times where it seemed u were trying 2 fit 2 many words in a one. but it got better,
dope shit man..keep it goin.
niiicce homie. quality is smooth.
chorus is cool got my head bobbing
beats nasty
very solid man lyrics were on point, there was a couple times where it seemed u were trying 2 fit 2 many words in a one. but it got better,
dope shit man..keep it goin.
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Delivery Is On Point... The Hook Was Ehhh Ok Tho... Smooth Writing But I Think U Couldve Smooth Out The Delivery A Lil ... But Then Again Thats Prolly Ur Style... This The First Time I Hear Ur Music... Dope.. I Like To Hear Dudes That Can Back They Written With Some Dope Music.... All in All This Is A Hot Track Bro... Stay Up
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i wasn't feelin' da delivery but like Flip said it's prob ur style I was feelin' wat u were sayin' tho ur writin' skills r good so dats a plus... overall imma give dis a 7 cuz 4 a 1st time track dis is pretty good better then other shit I've heard 4rm noobs haha
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Aha....Khulers pic is insane
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Re: Murk McNasty - My Life
i actually like what you were trying to do with the delivery and style with that beat..i love the concept but you were right about cramming words or syllables in...if you fine tuned this so flow was tight and on point with the beat the same way you did it would be tight..you got some punches that need to be harder or hit harder too but overall i really like this concept as a club type song
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beat was raw lyrics were alright tight flow....
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smooth as hell dude very dopish
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Re: Murk McNasty - My Life
The production is simply bananas...shit beats hard. I know I could tear that beat to shreds haha
...fell off beat a few times, but it was more because you might've crammed 1-too many words in that particular line. But other than that, it was a fun listen. The mixing seemed to be decent and you definitely displayed energy throughout the track.
In my opinion...it makes a good album filler. I wouldn't push it as a single, it just doesn't have the right "Ummph!" for that...but decent for mixtape material if that's what you're aiming for. Keep grinding. I'll say 7/10 on this one.
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...fell off beat a few times, but it was more because you might've crammed 1-too many words in that particular line. But other than that, it was a fun listen. The mixing seemed to be decent and you definitely displayed energy throughout the track.
In my opinion...it makes a good album filler. I wouldn't push it as a single, it just doesn't have the right "Ummph!" for that...but decent for mixtape material if that's what you're aiming for. Keep grinding. I'll say 7/10 on this one.
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Re: Murk McNasty - My Life
i like the energy and enthusiasm ya puttin in on it..
strong presence and lyrics are alright too..
i do agree with some of the other guys on the delivery tho..
probly just work on that too help elevate to the next level..pz
strong presence and lyrics are alright too..
i do agree with some of the other guys on the delivery tho..
probly just work on that too help elevate to the next level..pz
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