swagga? ionno!

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swagga? ionno!

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i was jus fucked up... no new mic or shit! but i felt like it..when it switches it sounds like i skipped a beat but i meant that dont know why..just felt right...its purely about swagga tho... tho i felt like i got choppy n the second verse and it fell into place....i got no time for it tho... if i spent more id be sick wit it tho.....but critique to the fullest niggaz....FOR REAL... i wanna hear how much i suck...so i can come back strong
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yea... i butchered a few of them... im still tryna find a comfort zone... i think maybe ill just stick to what i know then try new schemes n shit
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yaa it was kinda off beat but aye it is what it is,wasnt completely bad still listenable. quality was alright for what it was. keep goin at it
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aight aight..like ya flow off the start steady pretty strong.. some sweet spots, some slippage but mostly on
delivs pretty good too ..vocz seem a lil loud or distorted..but other than that shit was pretty nice..1
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