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Rather Be With You

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Once again...2 of the oldest audio heads on illest come together to spill yet another collab track into the chambers. I know you don't hear alot of collabs from him and I where it's only the two of us anymore, but whenever we do come together to make something...it's always special and always has meaning.
Artist: Viral & Kurse
Producer: Puzzle Productions
Written By: A. Brunello & R. Bueno
Mixed By: R. Bueno
Recorded @ D-Lab 21
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[soundclick]8920145[/soundclick]

First Verse: Viral
Seconds Verse: Kurse
Hook features a Bootsy Collins sample*
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to be honest the first verse was boring me with the delivery.. and the vocals werent mixed very well.. flow was kinda wishy washy. beat is chill tho. - decent verse viral but wasnt really feeling it.

Kurse - i liked the delivery and the flow on this one. voice fit the instrumental well.. i could see this as your main single for a tape or possibly an album. thought it was pretty smooth.

keep at it fam.

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Post by drunken jesus »

viral sounded a bit out of place liked that he toned his delivery down and isn't as high pitched anymore but he kinda sounded outta place mixing was a bit off like dynamiq said as well

your verse fit the beat well pretty solid delivery could've been better though

beat was dookie though samples been flipped a million times before better but dudes flip stripped all the soul/funk out of it verses were boring and the hook was repetative

should re-do the track over the instrumental of
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mQosOZG-FOY

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=htksq_YZJcU

and use it for a tape instead of an album
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by HKX »

dope shit dawg was pose 2 hop on dis track but didn't turned out dope go back in tho and remix Viral's vocals sounds like his libs or dubz r up think it's his libs r up tho besides dat it's a dope track u get off as always much props my niggaz
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I can turn his dubs down...but when I did, he was complaining that it didn't sound like him. And when they were up...he said it sounded better. I dunno. lol
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lol think it's his add libs haha feed my track hoe haha
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this is a solid track... but i don't think its a Viral track... Kurse is very solid on this track man... cause he can get that swag on somethin like this... Viral u can too but i think ur strong point is club joints and killer joints lol... its maybe the way u wrote it too i dunno... Viral just didn't really fit into the track... dunno if he was feelin it or not... beats hot as hades man... but like DJ said i think its a mixtape track than an album track still man AME holds the torch for alot of young inspiring cats on Illest and elsewhere... i know they inspire me alot to keep pushin with my shit... i gotta get another joint on here soon haha... just gotta save them benjamins lol... but this was a nice track... over all the lyrics were tight... on flow... on point... i liked it... keep doin ur thing guys!!!
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This was tight, not your usual club banger i hear from you all, but i liked it, the hook started getting annoying to me by the end of the track, verse wise, never heard viral really speak like that, sounds like he was just doing it to do it and not feeling it, and kurse u rode it well with the right style and flow and all.. good track..
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i hate it, kurse ur a dick, i didnt even get to hear this garbage before u put it out..much appreciated!...FAGGOT! haha
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calm yo beard....send me the new version you did and we'll post that one up!
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DEEZ NUTS!
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thats ok...atleast the better version was finally uploaded
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this wasnt bad maybe wasnt virals sorta thing but i dont think it was that bad kurse did quite well and the beat was dope who ever made it major props it's dope
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Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
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viral i actually think the first version was a bit better your deliverys too whiny on the new version
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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This is a classic sample.....HOT SHIT.. love the west coast nuances in the beat...the topic is what it should be considering the sample.... but its crazy to admit u cry on a track... its an open ya heart type thing so i cant relate much...but i bet this track a baja panties with the ladies lol....over all its sick..big ups
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