Friends Come N Go

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Friends Come N Go

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Friends Come N Go we all been there some do they own thing or some jus fuck u over and become enemies. Some want 2 be ur friend again over time when u don't want n e thing 2 do wit dat person. Dis is jus my story of how Friends Come N Go.

Dis one is goin' on the 3rd street album recorded it a few weeks ago. Leave a link so I could leave u feed enjoy da track.
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tight track, and i know you spilled what you had in your mind in this track, i felt like the chorus wasnt to much of a chorus, it was mixed like a verse. but fix that it still tight
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unfortunately da hook is sumthin' I ain't plannin' 2 fix haha but thanks tho man appreciate da feed I made da hook dat way it's sumthin' I was feelin' at da time.
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see i can relate to this track... cause i've had so-called friends turn their back on me too... the hook is fine as it is... down to the point i liked the hook... keep it homie... ur flow is different than everybody elses... u got those pauses n shit i like it... haha... i probably need to find my swag again... its just the way we write honestly... this was a dope song tho man... seriously its somethin i'd bump i still bump ur CD and Kurses haha... good shit tho man...
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Re: Friends Come N Go

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Dude that beat is sick as heck. Your concept hits home to a lot of people that listen, gets u thinking.. makes it a memorable track, lyrics were just right, delivery was on point, flow was tight, i thought the hook was just right.. Good track man..

You can peep this and drop feed on this if you like.. http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/love- ... 16072.html
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its life... who hasnt had to deal wit it..

this shit was illy man, some real shit... i would bump this shit
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Re: Friends Come N Go

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thats real right there..... they come n go...the revolving door... nice quality n tempo
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