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End of The Day....

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8) I know it's Been a minute so I felt this song was appropriate ..

This is off our up and coming MixxTape "Big Island Crypt"
More of a Tru Talk Track..I actually prefer these types of Songs..

Let me Know what Ya'll think..FYI I alway's Return Feed...1


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End of the day^^
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Re: End of The Day....

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Hook is very close to 50's man. Very commercial (minus the profanity). Loved the mellow out beat. Baseline could be stronger so that it's bumpin in the ride. The vocals are set kinda high overridin' the beat, but i likes it man. I really do. Hook still sounds like somethin' 50 put together.

It's damn near ready for the radio. Nice shit Tre/Petra!
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my homies... this shit is fire man... its the type of shit i could pop in the CD Player and just chill and maybe smoke a blunt when i've had a stressful day haha... hook was dope man... so were the verses... liked the feel of the song that mellow smooth Hawaii style... haha... can't wait for this shit to come out!!!!

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yeah this id dope i like the laid back feel it has to it the verses were pretty dope all round i liked the hook alot and that beat is hella nice looking forward to this mixtape ya last one was dope hopin on this one...
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@Riggz..Thanks for the feed Fam....i think 50 would probably like this..

@Law..You already know mayne...Definately somethin to elevate to.

@Toyh..Appreciate the feed Man..and drop one of your damn audios..they're pretty good ..hahaha

@Mutual...Yeah you know Me I'm into Hooks, Kinda my Specialty....and More to Come Guys...
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Sickest jawn I've heard in the Chamber in a longggggg while! Absolutely felt this!!! This the kinda shit you can cruise in your whip to, while gettin road-dome from a fine china doll while eating fried rice!

Open up another verse...let's remixxxxxx ittttttt!!! haha

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Man this is a good track yo, The hook is tight, definitely can just kick back to this joint..Maybe not smoke a blunt or nuttin but i can definitely have this playin on a smooth night with my lady.. Its versatile... Good stuff...
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Yeah Laid Back and Puffin with this one (or Not)hahaha...Thanks for the feed Guys..1

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Track is Tough Tre tha whole feel is chill and just flows great..Good Shit
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i peeped this a while ago an left feed obviously it didnt go thru or maybe i forget to hit submit haha. anyways yall,shit is dope definetly. i was feelin the verses more then the hook tho,not that the hook was bad in any way but i liked the verses more. keep it up yall! and if u getta chance peep my track 'take it all' id apperciate it.

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ay yo..thanks for the feed!!

@menace..nice to see ya

@Tramatik..I got you on dat..1

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Good Shit Fellas.. I Unno About Road Dome, Or Smoking A Blunt, But I Believe I Could Definately Listen To That While Bangin My O'l Lady.
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@Mac..Road dome's a lil dangerous ..it's only for those thrill seekers cuz a crash could leave u a unic..haha

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