No One Else (Hip-Rock)

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No One Else (Hip-Rock)

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"I gave my fucking soul to you; I remember holding you, when life got hard, torn apart who was there consoling you?
Who was there saying everything will be ok, now I’m haunted by your memory like every single day, hey.
I could never accept the fact that your gone, these days are too hard nights so long.
Baby so long, you know that life goes on, if you really love me why can’t we hold on.
You see me standing all alone.
All I want to know.
Why won’t you come home?
I can’t see you standing here.
I’m all by myself, I have no one else.

I gave it fucking all to her, my heart is calling her, got me high off her love just to fall and burn.
I don’t know what I saw in her, wish I could go back, you are my only regret just hope you know that.
I have no dreams, I lost all hope, I lost all love, no drugs all dope.
Suicidal thoughts not close almost; it hurts to think so I stay comatose.
You see me standing all alone.
All I want to know.
Why won’t you come home?
I can’t see you standing here.
I’m all by myself, I have no one else."

Feed would be appreciated...

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Boy your singin' is atrocious LOL! Kind of has a Kevin Rudolf type feel... fell off a bit on the 2nd verse. O my god... you sound like you're dyin' dude LOL! but this was an interesting track... I kind of liked it.

Keep it up K, different shit is nice.
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Post by -MenaCe- »

You know what i can see hearin something like this on the radio no dought. THa beat is smooth and catchy just one of those rock/rap joints that gets air play the singin needs to be tweaked alil but besides that everything else flow's good. Good Shit
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well.... i agree with Riggz... singin is nasty haha... i mean concept is there i can see where u were goin and what u wanted to do with it....so props on the creativity... heard pitch problems.... and during the bridge you were whispering where u wanted to scream it sounded like... its good tho man... props...
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Thanks I was just wanted to try something different, and I know I can't sing lol...

Maybe autotune can help a negro out, haha
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Young K wrote:Thanks I was just wanted to try something different, and I know I can't sing lol...

Maybe autotune can help a negro out, haha
only if u have the key to the song...
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Yeah I was talking to a couple of my rocker homies and I'm just gonna get one of them to sing it for me lol, it's a lot easier

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Auto Tune 5 would work here K I think.. it would give it that commercial feel. Plus every cat who sings off key uses Auto Tune, so it would work fine.
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yeah but u have to know the key of the beat before usin auto tune to make it sound good... otherwise ur gonna be dickin around with it for hours
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Re: No One Else (Hip-Rock)

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Not Absolutely Horrible..
haha right my nig

I appreciate you guys going in on my track like that, now I know what I need to fix...

Should be a hot jam when I'm finished with it...

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Post by Young K »

I did awhile ago it's awesome I think I like "The Whos" version slightly better than "Limp Bizkits" but it's a great song regardless.

And I'm not gonna be singing anymore my buhls coming over tomorrow to do his thing, and I'm taking my singing off from the hook as well.

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