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Audio Diss(Joey's Spliffed)for feed

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Joey Spliffed Diss..(Joey Piff aka Jonny Lynch aka Sean..haha)

Kid why'd you even sign ya name down
J.P must be piffed out high as a rain cloud
we aint the same now, you tryin to play the game
bluffin like you got hand man i 'm throwin spades out

fukin lame clown , yeah you a joker kid
but my punches rock ya world like a polar shift
turn ya over trick, and this pussy im beatin up
got no flo like fuckin a older bitch

i take a joey piff chop it up and roll with it
burn it.. still aint half as dope what tre's servin
It aint a kurse when verse my starts the dirt to fallin
cuz facin the tru'th will put the 'Nails in ya Coffin'

you on ya grind now grind House reppin them
but ya my space page still aint made 20 friends
you aint got any cents how you gon make Change
you let truth out to spew bout ya fake fame



now let's pretend for a minute that this fake plain
timid lil bitch did the things his weebly page say?
that you worked with def jam, chris brown, T I, new edition
Kid you don't gotta Lie to kick it

we all know you aint the illest nigger up on illest
we wont think any different of ya shitty lyrics
ya doin big thing's? only way that shit's true
is if your fuckin ya moms fat ass in ya bedroom

ya dead food Fool , thinkin you can take Tre
Go ask ya Bitch she'll tell you my beef is grade A
i'll leave ya laid slain shank split ya brain boy
spread this bitch open like centerfolds in playboy

you must be gay boy bio showin evidence
"your record companie's lookin to blow in 2010"
next year you'll be askin to suck my dick again?
but ya status aint high enough to touch my timberland's



cuz like ya said in ya song you on that cheesy shit
that aint a compliment kid ya overconfident
so terriffic you da opposite with ya jokes bro
im so explicit my dope flo exposed da ho's

next victim this is what it's come to be?
the best things bout ya drops in the chamber was the beat
'sean'te be proud lil lady
ya got a famous face lips resemble Jay-Z's

just wishin you could execute ya mission
ya never a hazard to me even if you had ambition
and im hella tired with ya lies ,recitin K's illah lines
da only time you spit 'KillAh' rhymes

ya run ya hood nah the kids tasks to get kick in the ass
by tre and say it's football
im in the end zone joe aint even in the red zone
i'll leave Joey spliffed Jonny Lynched a dead JOE




Fuckem , aint no way he's stoppin cuz ya drop will probably
be assy as ya quality..

OKAY the battles over it's official I WON..

now for REAL Feed..Please..good and bad...1
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Post by -MenaCe- »

MURDER!!!


Tre you Def got at that nigga with this one man ya flow and just the direct lines are just sick you got some nice wordplay in there also..Im feelin this shit you def got ya point across


Damn i mean i challenged you also so does that mean im gonna get one of these care packages?





p.s I Would love one...lol






Overall Good Shit Tre
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I'm Feelin This Shit Right Here, I Know Joey Picked This Beat So He Kind Of Fucked Himself.

Licks Were Of Point, Like The Fact That Every Bar Was A Punch, And All Tru.

Like That You Chose To Do No Hook On This One, And The Part You Dropped The Beat Out Really Helped So It Didn't Seem Monotonous.

Top Notch Production Everything Was Mixed Well And Quality Was Fire.
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hahahah....it was good:D
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Lmao.. thanks P.T.R.
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Dam... i never heard this shit.. but dude came hard... i would like to listen to the other one..
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^^^^^^^^^^
that's an easy one..it's in this thread..>> http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/tre-t ... 15047.html

haha now that i looked at it..i still havent even gotten my win for it yet..lmao
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lol dude took a shit on this kids whole pre-future. now he aint got shit.nice man
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Good looks $yph idk what happened with that haha..

@Tramatik thanks for the feed i thought this was one of the better disses i did....anyway Good looks kid i got you back..1
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