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G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music

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hope u guys enjoy!!!!! let us know what u think!!!
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The 1st verse i didnt like so much.. beat is hot. 2nd verse kinda sounded kinda forced but it was tight. you need to introduce to that artist. im loving the fastness.. You killed your verse. kinda wish it was longer. It was an eminem flow at first then you went on your own and brought your own style in it. i wanted to hear more of your style. over all good.. imma give it 8/10
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This shit was Dope nigga!
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word... thanx for the feed guys... this ain't the last that ur gonna hear from us were gonna keep goin... fuck the haters!!!!!!!!
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thanx for the feed fellas
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Post by drunken jesus »

listening - first guys delivery sounds way too unnatural, attempt at singing sounds really terrible, & the extended words after that do too, hook - volumes way too low and its unclear and not delivered very well and its way too long, ghosts verse, delivery/flow sounded kinda good at points but it fell off alot and clarity/enunciation didn't sound good probably should've punched-in and did it in sections, lawgix verse, first part sounded real odd cause you did it in a weird voice it was ok i guess definately sounded really eminem influenced which isn't a good thing, second part was ok would've sounded better with an echo effect instead of repeating the words, ghosts last 8 bars or so, sounded a lil better than the first but still had the same problems with delivery and flow, beats aight
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thanx for the feed DJ thanx for breakin it down
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Post by Tellavision »

i thought the track was decent definite have heard better joints between you all...the werid voice think was so-so..beat wasn't too bad just wasn't feeling the hook...prolly needs some better mixing cause the volumes were at a low level...verse's was okay...again the voice effects should have been left out on them...nevertheless not bad of a track...
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Post by AntiMaTTer »

shit came out good. sounds older and some parts coulda been done better. but everyones verses sounded fairly close to each others levels which is hard as fuck to achieve with everyone having diff mics setups etc. good track thru n thru i think
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thanx for the feedback man its appreciated
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Post by Habit »

verse 1. sounds nice man, but its almost as if the beat dont suit your style, you flow is quite staccato which is fine but the beat really doesnt sound right

verse2. Flow is nice bro, im british so it reminds me of grime. But yh its cool

verse3. your flow is nice, lyrics are hard, but delivery sounds too unenthusiastic, maybe its just the recording, u need to turn them vocals up or suttin

but overall its hard keep makin dem bangers fam
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thanx for the feedback man...
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Post by TreTru »

First verse..presence is kinds low Imo..ruthless is coo.tho. no slip ups

Hook is kinds trippy...

2nd verse was aight ..quicker tempo..didn't slip too much..ugh yeah his Flo is actually pretty good.

Hook is starting to grow on me... I guess..just can't make out what's being
Said..

3rd verse well I think this is a mixture of guys..is coo y'all vibe off one another..pretty well..

Ohh the mixx needs help tho...

But This was decent for an older track..
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