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hope u guys enjoy!!!!! let us know what u think!!!
hope u guys enjoy!!!!! let us know what u think!!!
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
The 1st verse i didnt like so much.. beat is hot. 2nd verse kinda sounded kinda forced but it was tight. you need to introduce to that artist. im loving the fastness.. You killed your verse. kinda wish it was longer. It was an eminem flow at first then you went on your own and brought your own style in it. i wanted to hear more of your style. over all good.. imma give it 8/10
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
This shit was Dope nigga!
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
word... thanx for the feed guys... this ain't the last that ur gonna hear from us were gonna keep goin... fuck the haters!!!!!!!!
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
thanx for the feed fellas
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
listening - first guys delivery sounds way too unnatural, attempt at singing sounds really terrible, & the extended words after that do too, hook - volumes way too low and its unclear and not delivered very well and its way too long, ghosts verse, delivery/flow sounded kinda good at points but it fell off alot and clarity/enunciation didn't sound good probably should've punched-in and did it in sections, lawgix verse, first part sounded real odd cause you did it in a weird voice it was ok i guess definately sounded really eminem influenced which isn't a good thing, second part was ok would've sounded better with an echo effect instead of repeating the words, ghosts last 8 bars or so, sounded a lil better than the first but still had the same problems with delivery and flow, beats aight
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
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Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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thanx for the feed DJ thanx for breakin it down
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
i thought the track was decent definite have heard better joints between you all...the werid voice think was so-so..beat wasn't too bad just wasn't feeling the hook...prolly needs some better mixing cause the volumes were at a low level...verse's was okay...again the voice effects should have been left out on them...nevertheless not bad of a track...
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
shit came out good. sounds older and some parts coulda been done better. but everyones verses sounded fairly close to each others levels which is hard as fuck to achieve with everyone having diff mics setups etc. good track thru n thru i think
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Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
thanx for the feedback man its appreciated
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself
Lawgix
Illest Radio
"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
Lawgix
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
verse 1. sounds nice man, but its almost as if the beat dont suit your style, you flow is quite staccato which is fine but the beat really doesnt sound right
verse2. Flow is nice bro, im british so it reminds me of grime. But yh its cool
verse3. your flow is nice, lyrics are hard, but delivery sounds too unenthusiastic, maybe its just the recording, u need to turn them vocals up or suttin
but overall its hard keep makin dem bangers fam
verse2. Flow is nice bro, im british so it reminds me of grime. But yh its cool
verse3. your flow is nice, lyrics are hard, but delivery sounds too unenthusiastic, maybe its just the recording, u need to turn them vocals up or suttin
but overall its hard keep makin dem bangers fam
'Im a fucking lowlife, the worse kind of scum,
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
just ask my ex girl she'll tell you Im a cunt'
Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
thanx for the feedback man...
Don't Let The Game Make U, Make Urself
Lawgix
Illest Radio
"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
Lawgix
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"Sometimes You Gotta Stand By Your Failures To Recognize Your Success" Joe Budden
pest wrote:You look Easy... Whats Good?
AntiMaTTer wrote:lmao ...is this how you hit on all the chicks?
Re: G.S.B. feat. Devious & Lawgix - Killer Music
First verse..presence is kinds low Imo..ruthless is coo.tho. no slip ups
Hook is kinds trippy...
2nd verse was aight ..quicker tempo..didn't slip too much..ugh yeah his Flo is actually pretty good.
Hook is starting to grow on me... I guess..just can't make out what's being
Said..
3rd verse well I think this is a mixture of guys..is coo y'all vibe off one another..pretty well..
Ohh the mixx needs help tho...
But This was decent for an older track..
Hook is kinds trippy...
2nd verse was aight ..quicker tempo..didn't slip too much..ugh yeah his Flo is actually pretty good.
Hook is starting to grow on me... I guess..just can't make out what's being
Said..
3rd verse well I think this is a mixture of guys..is coo y'all vibe off one another..pretty well..
Ohh the mixx needs help tho...
But This was decent for an older track..
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