WEEDZ..... real talk

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WEEDZ..... real talk

Post by SolQet »

dis is a song i wrote for my moms who is goin thru some very rough times right now. she really has been her whole life.. anyways the beats a sample from some Ozzy song i think, but i thought da mood of it fit my lyrics. lemme kno wats good.
thanx homies

~SolQet

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Post by RAJE »

WOW. that hooks Fire.

you can interpret where your coming from, definately get your point across.

i'm not sure i understand your title, but i might have missed it, why "weeds"?

good shit though solqet, keep this up.
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Post by SolQet »

i got it from da last bar in da song.. "ya got carried away wit da wind when it blew you, away but not today, filled da holes deez weedz grew thru"... metaphoric kinda like how you pull em n they jus keep comin back.. but by fillin da holes ya gettin rid of em fer good, ya digg?
but thanx fer da positive feedback, its really appreciated!

~SolQet
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Post by RAJE »

yeah i get it now, thanks for explaining.

basically saying that you can get rid of a problem but another one comes up? something like that?
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Post by SolQet »

riight, ya solve one, n ya got anotha befo ya kno it.. da overall concept is jus about killing the root (weeds) of her pain. the weeds growin back symbolizes her relapses, n fillin da holes is symbolizing her jus gettin betta, bein happy again.. for good. Its an emotional joint from some shit ive gone thru, but im speakin to her sayin dat dispite erthang dats happened, shes still strong, and im thankin her for everything shes done fer me. n doin da best she could/can.. kno wat i mean? dayum kinda a life story, but hey! lol
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the beat was fire where did u get it?
the lyrics were quite good
the flow and emotion was better
i wasa really feelin this
the hook was dope
keep'em comin
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by SolQet »

thaaanks fam. yeah i really did put alot into dis joint.. i got da beat offa soundclick, i kno its sick. again, thanks fo da positivess
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Post by Kurse »

Nice one. You're killin us over here...you're totally shittin on the rest of us with the amount of material you put out! haha You bang 'em out so quick! But I was the same way in the beginning...I guess I just had alot to say at the time.
But it's kool...there's nuthin better to write about than your life. I mean...if you don't tell your story, then who will!? Right? lol
Good lyrics and a very solid hook! You need to tell Gomer to bring your asses over here already. That way we can record, get sum food and play sum damn video games. (Oh yea...there's a dope headshop around the corner that I gotta take you guys to haha)
I'm home right now...jump on Alex's head until he moves!
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Post by Onediversekid »

I love your music.. and I think that's all I really need to say at this point.
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Post by SolQet »

aww thanks guys! i know kurse i thiiink/hope were gunna come out thur tomorra n we gon get down as hell. word
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Post by Dead Silence »

wow
good shit no lie
deep shit
about kurse saying bangin out tracks weekly
thats the way i was too like him but sometimes u loose ur motivation to record
and u start gettin picky with beats and shit
so be prepared for that low point in ur rap career
im sure others have been thru it
but this track was fire
if u keep doing shit like this
and elevatin than that shouldnt happen

so i was think
if u and Kurse was on a track
itd be like the audio form
of
HQ and Rell

Kurse knows what im talking about
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Post by SolQet »

thaanks DS, its funny ya say dat cause i jus wrote like 2 verses to dis one beat n then i was like naah fuck dat i can find i betta one lol.. but thanks fo da positive feed, stay up yalll
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Post by Problemz »

like tha beat & tha topic 4sho... im likin this joint shrty, deff a nice deep dropp!!! lots of meanin n pain in this join i can tell... i feel ya pain, word.

8/10 url, keep spittin u def elevatin!!!
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Post by TreTru »

HUH?...WTF...your a beast a monster, sik damn some real strong
visuals on this..ya metas and sim's are tight..if you write all ya
stuff i'd say your advanced..mos def..

concepts like these are alway's awesome IMO..

i dont know what else to say ...so good job... 8)
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Post by SolQet »

thaanks, hell yeah all mah shits written 100% by me, i wouldnt feel right spittin anyone elses words, ya feel me? thanks again fo da positives tru, stay up!
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