Got bored so I threw my mic in. Haven't done an audio since I first started comin' here and I might actually try to get better at it. Fell off quite a bit in this track but I really don't quite know what I'm doing on audio yet, haha.
Still gotta stop the whisperin shit. Enough of my own criticism though, I have a lot to improve, haha.
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had a strange sound to ya voice
seemed like sum strange effect
lyrics started not bad got a lot worse IMO
the beat wasnt that good...too me that is
but ay it takes a while to make the transition between this ish
scriptures take a lil more thought IMO
cus in audio u can make up for stuff with your prescense, delivery n shyt
but yeah when i started i was terrible a couple songs down the line people sayin they like my lyrics
n shyt i maybe need to do sum work but i'm gettin there
keep'em comin Bill
seemed like sum strange effect
lyrics started not bad got a lot worse IMO
the beat wasnt that good...too me that is
but ay it takes a while to make the transition between this ish
scriptures take a lil more thought IMO
cus in audio u can make up for stuff with your prescense, delivery n shyt
but yeah when i started i was terrible a couple songs down the line people sayin they like my lyrics
n shyt i maybe need to do sum work but i'm gettin there
keep'em comin Bill
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Your Voice Was 2 Loud .. Beat Wasnt Loud Enough .. Funny Effect To Your Shit.. First Time I Heard U Tryna Spit Slow .. N It Seemed It Wasnt Comin Out Natural ... U Just Gotta Let it Flow .. Switch Ya Voice Up... And Feel Good When u Spittin The Shit.. But For Da Attempt I Give U Props And For Critisizin Your Self I Give U Props.. You'll Grow If U Just Keep Doin Ya thang... Anyways Bill Fuck OFFICER RIIIICKY!..
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...this was wayyy too short. Also contained too much bullshark testosterone! But in all seriousness. Lose the effect on your voice...it takes away from any seriousness that A "diss track" might have. Punches are mediocre fat jokes lol and definately needs better mixing. But with practice comes good results over time.
4 out of 10.
...this was wayyy too short. Also contained too much bullshark testosterone! But in all seriousness. Lose the effect on your voice...it takes away from any seriousness that A "diss track" might have. Punches are mediocre fat jokes lol and definately needs better mixing. But with practice comes good results over time.
4 out of 10.
yeah... i see lots of improvement... first off get a better mic... lol... step back from the mic u got... don't get all up on that shit... cause it drowns out the instrumental and then we just hear you loud as hell... flow was a bit off at points... i'd work on stayin on point with the beat... mic presense... and if u need to re-write ya lyrics cause it drags on... then do it... don't be worried "oh this ain't gonna sound good" just shorten it up to where its short sweet and to the point... keep workin on it dude... i'm sure u'll be a dope audio head once u practice at it...
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