Early Morning Freestyle

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http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 14a492a39/

Fuck it..

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Post by El Original »

hahaha funny shit man you sound really sleepy nice freestyle though
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Post by TreTru »

dude for real?..you sound bombed hah..uhh could've been alot longer..
maybe you should try spittin one of your writtens on that thing..
and see how it comes out...
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Soundclick ask..MAD question
lol i got confused...
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Post by precise »

lol, interestin, not sure what to say about this one, i agree try spittin a written
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Post by - Mutual - »

sounded pretty tired n way too short but MP3 recordin is pretty good thats what i spit on my freestyle track with so yeah jus try spittin a written
The Eagerness Is Putrid My Fluids Acid Leaves You Vexed Like Black Holes
Your Inept To Correct Stretched Like Fat Folds Perplexed Like Castro
I'm So Tenacious With Rhymes Sensatious So Patient With Lines
While You Fill Your Writtens With Filler And So Stay Vacant In Mind
I'm Amiable But Too Your Haters I Appease Your Arcane Admissions
Dark Games No Vision Your Avarice Lead To Scarred Shamed Partitions
So Callous In His Candor You Have To Coerce For Neglect
For Worse Or For Best I'm Confidant With A Verse Of Respect

!!ILLEST MINDS!!
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Post by Kurse »

No hate Duc3 but come on mannnnn...

...you told niggaz to wait a second, killed half the actual recorded time and then spit an actual 18 second freestyle. lol
And what killed it even more was the fact that it was 18 seconds of slow-flow style...it wasn't even jappin off! Maybe if you was jappin off...you could fit half a verse into 18 seconds, but that shit just dragged homie.

I counted your bars. You literally spit 6 bars.

Why would you want anyone to feed 6 bars!?
We're koo and shit...so you know I'm never on sum hater shit..
...but we gotta be real here bro...this shit was kind of a waste of time and definately not really worth making a thread for.

Spit a whole verse or sumthin. Make the time being spent to listen to it atleast worth it.
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Alright I got you kurse
Appreciate the thread big homie
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