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PurleeDef - Put It Down

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http://www.www.illestlyrics.com/copyrig ... 369f8b71c/

first time i got into a studio to record. Always recorded out of my room
I'm every kind of a problem, homie I carry karma inside of my soul, my body's COMPOSED of jack...
of marijuana and smoke, I'm so mad - but figure, the weed and liquor is everybody I KNOW
I ain't bipolar, my......only 2 sides are either high or sober
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Tell your mom, come over

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Post by Kurse »

The beat was pretty different...sounded like sum nintendo type shit, but your flow complimented it well.
I like that chopped effect you put on the "Put It Down" chorus. Mixing was pretty clean...so whoever the mixing artist is does a nice job. Lyrically I thought it was entertaining.
Only thing that stops this song from soundin "radio worthy" was the instumental, but other than that I'd say it's def mixtape worthy.
Cool drop.
I give it an 7.5 or 8 out of 10

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thanks for the feed...yeah I was gonna redo the beat while I was in the studio but I didn't have the time. Im still gonna do something about it....just not sure what yet...
I'm every kind of a problem, homie I carry karma inside of my soul, my body's COMPOSED of jack...
of marijuana and smoke, I'm so mad - but figure, the weed and liquor is everybody I KNOW
I ain't bipolar, my......only 2 sides are either high or sober
...
Tell your mom, come over

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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

This Shit Pretty Tight Fam ..
i Liked Tha Beat ..
Tha Hook Was Simple, But i Was Feelin` it ..
it Was Catchy ..
i Thought U Woulda Got More Lyrical ..
But This Was Decent Lyrically ..
i Would Still Bump This Shit ..
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.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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Post by Haz »

This was Straight ,
Dunt Know Why Alot Of ya bars Ain Even Rhyme but Dats Your Style i Guess ...
You Sound some Southern Dood .. So If Thats Wut Ur Aimin for Thats Koo ..
Lyrically i Dunt Think This wus .. i Dunno ..
The Beat Wus Straight , You got Coo Flow .. Do wud U Do ..
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:This was Straight ,
Dunt Know Why Alot Of ya bars Ain Even Rhyme but Dats Your Style i Guess ...
You Sound some Southern Dood .. So If Thats Wut Ur Aimin for Thats Koo ..
Lyrically i Dunt Think This wus .. i Dunno ..
The Beat Wus Straight , You got Coo Flow .. Do wud U Do ..

Im from Florida. This is actually pretty left field from the music I normally make. I'll do lyrical when it's necessary....I just like to have some stuff I can ride around in the whip and play at high volumes lmao


thanks for all the feed
I'm every kind of a problem, homie I carry karma inside of my soul, my body's COMPOSED of jack...
of marijuana and smoke, I'm so mad - but figure, the weed and liquor is everybody I KNOW
I ain't bipolar, my......only 2 sides are either high or sober
...
Tell your mom, come over

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Post by Haz »

Na I Feel You Homie.
It Was a Cool Track i Ain Say it Was Shitty Or Nothin ..
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Post by HKX »

dis shit was dope kid like how da mixin sounds, like da effects in the hook, beat was different but u ripped da beat a nigga like me likes beats dat r weird and u could make it into a hot song shit was nice dawg imma give u a 8/10 keep droppin nigga

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Post by drunken jesus »

liked this, beat got a lil annoying after awhile, flow & delivery were on point, lyrics could've been better they were solid overall, hook was done well, for the harmonizing sections it probably would've sounded better if you did more layers, but other than that no complaints really

refreshing to hear a dope new head in the audio section, holla @ me if you wanna collab on some shit, i produce
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Cee4 »

this shit is dope. i like everything about. coulda maybe stepped it up a little lyrically but the track wasnt meant to be super lyrical. i like what you did with the hook
probably my favourite track in the creation chamber for a while
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