faceless apes heads backwards

drowning in own matter

I ask my self why we're not focused, on the bigger picture at all, and how we can live in this world of dreams, that falls to ruin in the hands of a group so small... Should I be glad to call out in my anguish and forget it all, or will I wait till the end of time, 'n open my eyes to the pit falls. ...

I have to agree with everyone else
for a free, this was pretty indept
and you painted the picture well

haha the end of your piece is pure genious
I'm liking this a lot....
overall a very well put together piece
two thumbs up for this

pussy get the backhand

You dick riding faggot

guzzle it up fast

flaky fake ape

No prob

anyone else got some feedback for me

Thks for the feedback Mesar and Kause @ Mesar, yeah it doesnt really sound like a rap but more like a spoken word if you look at it that way :lol: @ Kause I wrote it to a horrorcore beat :) and i always write to a beat, but my flow is allways a bit off but that's cause I dont know how to put everyth...

Fuck everything live the high life, no need for the lime light You a slow motion nigga, ya life flashes before ya blind eyes I Crack that skull quick Yo honey makes'm days this sweet I Pack that Full clip Yo dunny fakes 'n lays six deep I'm 360 with it, I spray indefenite you lack presicion, stay i...

I'm liking this
sounds really smooth
lyrics are on point and overall this is a decent track

Thks for the honest crit guys... really apreciate it !!! ( Defiance ) I will try to work on my meta's and multi's next time and also write about a good topic.... I can see now that this was still to basic and I'm rusty as Hell :lol: I need to go and write a lot more to be up to par with most ppl her...

this was ment as a sarcastic piece and to get back at writing it doenst make a lot of sense i know and there isn't a real story line in it but that's cause it's a bunch of 1 liners stuck together and actualy you can see anything in it that you like but the key prhases to remember are these lines Cry...