This was from me and 32Neilz topical 8 bars on HIPHOP VS RAP a battle.. teammates over time there friendship diminished and we are all witnesses as they begin to fight to the bitter end no...... before they can finish it... i step between and scream stop... i know y'all came for a beef but boys refu...

i was feeling this more as a poem.. it had a poetic feel to it, and it wasn't lyrical at all... but i don't think u were trying to be. I was feelin the realness of it...

I liked this alot deeply poetic and lyrical at the same time...also the flow was seamless .. keep up

I was feeling this track... delivery was real good... shitwas funny in some spots to ur voice reminds me of skee lo... lmao.... no hate tho It sounds good... on

I liked it flow was real good and the beat reminded me more of old tribe though.... more then snoop some funny lines too

This was more of a joke with treed..... not my usual writing style/quality

Thanx for the feed though

till death, i beat um and thwart plans of life.. an eat um of course
yep feed on the corpus shit... he'll be a burrito of sorts
then spit back into a bag then smash um now he's splattered about
battered about... mmmmmmm yeah beer battered... i'll carry it out

the shit ur sayin... im laughin at you... dog ya funny
cus steel dosnt make cents... its fuckin copper dummy

fuck that he cant just look... the daym kids all touchy feely then he gets a stuffy feelin... hes in a coffin and its fuckin scary unloads a few into the top then kicks it off... now u gotta listen yall hes shittin balls realizin hes missin heart.. no really its been lost his face starts drippin off...

u think ur nice 2em well i must of missed those lines
ur spit dont shine.. why? its easy ur shit dont rhyme
i hope ya wize and dont reply or try an write a verse
since u the fire starter... stick to the lighter work

I like it... emotions were on point... lyrically better then other stuff ive seen from you

It was ok... liked the subject matter and emotion... but it was a little simple

Da mystery of chessboxing...

Got me into writing lyrics....
To this day most lyrical song I ever

thanks for the feed... got this moved to written rhymes so it doesn't get slept on... so keep it coming lol

why u hating on him just stop it this guy Probably cried, lol... well now hes hurtin more cus hes not ready for beef! treeds a fuckin herbavore were all haters... yeah u nice and every one else is lying naaaa dude u aint bringin the heat, so u surely wont survive it you asked for innocent beef, a ch...