Monu your signature.... Nuff Said

House rules 6 Bars due 24 hours after check in http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/splashking-moneymaker-vt22824.html http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/s3v3nth1rty-splashking-vt22401.html#p174737 Check -- Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:56 pm -- your rhymes declined, why don't you read the signs/ like crippled dr...

Flow:splash
punches:seven
enjoyment:seven
wordplay:seven

seven edged out in this for me.

mvgt: Seven

SplashKING: you wanna be the Maker,but im puttin ya Lights-Out-Fag I be sitting on Money all day.... #white house swag Alright wordplay/flip you never been in a race,bitch you cant bother kings persistence im destroying the MoneyMaker like i just Erased The Economy's Existence smooth. But pretty dec...

kool set it up. not very familiar with the rules. this is gonna be my first battle

-- Sat Jun 18, 2011 10:33 am --

on here

alright. so i'm finally trying to have m first battle on here. if anyones interested hit me up

hearing alot about the basic thing.
thanks for the feedback, will work on that

individual deception, damage your visual perception/ i got my lyrical game protected like sexual contraception/ leave you dreaming like inception, not setting an exception/ you and hip hop? i got a problem with the union like a wedding reception/ like rabid cattle i started branding, my flow is so o...

im SERIOUSLY feeling this man! like wow your style is very poetic and i love that while im reading, your flow and mulits were on point. you used words that arent used often, which is DEFINETLY a posotive trait to have while rhyming. over all this is a master piece! definetly one to remember! keep it...

definetly means alot man.
thank you for the feedback. you definetly made me wanna start dominating the written section

word up i'll keep that in mind thanks

Definetly bro will keep you posted on that matter!

damn i'm feelin these especially the second and third ones

the rhyme scheme/flow was really well present,
had a message to it which i like, it makes me wanna read through the whole thing slowly, over all nice drop Mike. I belive if you wrked on you vocab abit more you would be FIRE =] keep it up

DEFINETLY feelin this!
smooth flow, the over all message was very clearly designed,
emotion was easy to feel, i liked the word choice here and there also!
but damn man it's deep! i like it alot!