this chit reminded me of some Nas shit

for real had solid flow too and it.. and good content.. not overplayed at the least..

always like your bars there usually well constructed and well thought out..

keep dropping homie

you can't capture-me, actually I'm mathematically stronger than earths-gravity reverse-tragedy you mad-at-me cause I'm stylin graphically painting imaginings i had-to-be the mack-and-king attacking-dreams like a Freddy Cruger reincarnate i weave-an-carve-fate in between-a-hard-place a cut demeanor l...

once more... let me take you through a story of life a man alone with his kids with death for a wife alone in their strife, he trys to put meals on the table Trying to carry the burden but the wheels were unstable he feels weak and unable, to keep his charade face up got a girlfriend once but they w...

An actual piece of art i made..

painted with pastels and charcoal brush.. also white eraser for mixing the colors

took about 2 hours.. tell me what you think

yeah i liked this, good flow didn't like the caps though.. had a good solid flow the content was good liked the run on sentences line.. thought it was funny with the apparent long lines.

good shit tho

keep rhyming

i liked this man had a feeling of "fuck what you think, ima be me" type ish to it.. enjoyed it.. i like your writing style with the pauses as periods.. makes it easier to pick up on how you flowed it.. good content.. liked the emotion behind the words seemed meaningful and real.. nice shit...

nijitsu kungfu mofucker flinging nun chucks at dumb fucks doing dirt like a dump truck you winning must be dumb luck I'm here to One up any all comers Coyotes to roadrunna a known stunna so gutta and so slick just call me gold butta the hoe throat buster while y'all get no pussy like an old rubber i...

lol wrong place to post man this belongs in "the scriptures" not classic


but chea some simple bars, sound military based.. welcome to illest.

I summon new-sterile-mixtures of developin-songs-now
With a delicate-bomb-found in American-compounds
^^ nice

I liked the multis some were off but most were right on

solid lil drop nice to see you elevating.. keep working on the syllable for syllable multi scheme..

KEep rhyming

a locomotive with a car of corrosive and explosive rolling out control an invoking commotion with a motive go kid, is what they tell me.. tell i made there rhymes all smelly by dropping pop like jelly... Yeah I'm shit.. and I'm back like Machiavelli i scratch my belly and scrape hotter jams cause y'...

Dope!

-- Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:51 pm --

Lol nah it was cool man i was just playing with you.

multis were fire content was chilling and very compelling.,.


loved it

keep rhyming

lol

don't really like the "I'm famous" type pieces.. but besides that there was some solid multis and rhymes in there some thrown here and there haphazardly, while some rung like a bell.. overall i enjoyed the read.. like the ps part too


keep rhyming WUN^

DEEEEEP
Shits DEEEP

Still going deeper


DEEEEEEP!!!

lol

nah this piece was good man.. highly enjoyable some real good observations made personal.. i think a lot of people can relate to the content and agree with the message..

keep writing nice to see ya dropping something

this was legit.. could of had a lot more consistent punches and more name plays with a name ilk ghostwriter to go off of..

but yeah some of those lines got me laughing good shit

was a good read just not really what i would expect in a battle.

GO PACK GO!!!!