good to hear from ya homie. glad that things are working out in ya fav stay safe and do ya thing

Before you reach the sky, you gotta create a tower And a balcony to look down at the fakes and cowards love how the opening lines started out and the rhyme and multis are nice, good opener. It seems like each day that they waste their hours Each lame excuse and complaint gets louder Why do we let ou...

what a loser...

dont fucking waste bacon.

shits pretty dope so far, peeping "Introduction" right now.

pretty str8 delivery and solid energy. presence is good and
the rhymes are good nothing too out there but a solid flow with it.
shits not bad though i like it so far ill prolly download it and peep
it out

i thought i left feedback on this bullshit?

Phasewon wrote:Dopppppppe.

i picture you murderin this beat violently...i wana hear phasewon on this shit. beats dope as hell tho gonz good shit man, keep branching out and finding new sounds

i give props that you can write a lot in a short time, the lyrics are ok but you keep busting out more tracks but i wana hear your delivery improve. the flow needs to be cleaned up, the verse needs to be cleaned up. too many words, learn how you can drag/pronounce certain words differently to fit th...

wudup. Well we certainly love to give feedback but we love to receive feedback too. And welcome to the site, get up and active and make something happen.

this was tight Cyan. I really liked this track fam. Great work. You definitely putting in some work man. The singing and the harmonics of this sounded really well put together and the lyrics are great and this is something that i can just vibe with and get into it ya know? Good music man keep grindi...

it was alright i got the hang of the flow few bars in but could still be tightend up some more. kinda looks like a freestyle/keystyle or w/e.
its str8 though. the opener was pretty good and kept a steady flow
thru out. try some more rhyme schemes though

Unleashing black words on white pages, keepin meanins locked in words, like birds in tight cages/ Until im free. Read between my lion's (lines) rages , while im spidering truth on ya rap web pages/ Light to the blind like colors to a racist,I guess we'll never know how far a little hate can take us...

i vote for devil

his punches were better. idk wtf these other fools talking about novels punchings being better...

devil uses multis, wordplay and punches in a line which to me is what i want to see. if you need a further breakdown then holla.

this sounded a little better to me but be careful on your pausing for too long cuz it can throw the vibe off. just keep working on it. this here is my home-girl from way back when. check her flow out and see if you can see what im talking about. LADY ESSENCE: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ohi_yV2wreo

lmao@ haz...fool

single. g's up hos down.

its str8 not my cup of tea per-se but its aite. it just sounds sorta drab and monotone to me though and is hard for me to vibe with it. work on the structure of your lyrics to the beat more so you dont Force/Rush your lines with it sounding unnatural. its going to take a lot of practice and hard wor...