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- Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:19 pm
- Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
- Topic: Illest's Poet of the Year for 2010
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1363
Re: Illest's Poet of the Year for 2010
Well shit, glad to see u all appreciate the poetic-ness of my drops. I'll keep em coming...
- Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:17 pm
- Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
- Topic: Illest's Most Potential of 2010
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1732
Re: Illest's Most Potential of 2010
Damn fam, I'm surprised I got so many awards, def appreciate the luv...
- Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:15 pm
- Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
- Topic: Illest's Multiple Threat Artist for 2010
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1365
Re: Illest's Multiple Threat Artist for 2010
I have a feeling Kurse probably got the votes from cats who've been around all year, and I probably got the votes for people who've been around just for the second half of the year. But Kurse is a damn talented emcee and producer, so tying with him in a category like this is definitely an honor.
- Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:57 pm
- Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
- Topic: Illest's Feedback Award for 2010
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1388
Re: Illest's Feedback Award for 2010
Glad to know u all appreciatin' the effort I make to give thoughtful feedback in these forums. But I hope a bunch of others step up to outshine me in this category in future months...
I think this should be a monthly award, might encourage people to give more thoughtful feedback...
I think this should be a monthly award, might encourage people to give more thoughtful feedback...
Re: Master
I liked it, though think it would be improved if ur delivery had more emotion in it. The beat and your lyrics have a lot of latent emotion, but not so much in ur delivery. But, other than that suggestion, I think this is well done, though maybe that first spoken word verse could be mixed a bit bette...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:13 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: twin in minds body
- Replies: 3
- Views: 766
Re: twin in minds body
Not bad man. I liked that other drop of urs I read yesterday better, but this was pretty solid in itself. The internal rhyming u got going on in some of the lines comes off smooth, and the meanings ur expressing are clear but still leave space for some reflection. Not bad man, keep writting, keep dr...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:10 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: MY LYRICS, RATE AND COMMENT THE NEXT EMINEM
- Replies: 10
- Views: 3065
Re: MY LYRICS, RATE AND COMMENT THE NEXT EMINEM
I'm not gonna go into detail with this, especially since I don't even know if your even gonna be back around the forums. Now first off, I didn't read this whole piece, long as shit. But from what I did read I think u got potential as a writer. To get more feed in the future, be sure to structure ur ...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:59 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Inner Ear Infection
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1267
Re: Inner Ear Infection
Alright man, this was pretty good. I thought the first half was better than the second half. You started to go off on some rather strange tangents in the second half, like that whole see/sea/seam/etc process, cuz while I could appreciate your goal to do some wordplay, I didn't really feel how it end...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:46 pm
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: like a dream ft. chelsea
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1080
Re: like a dream ft. chelsea
This has got some potential, but as others have mentioned there's some ways this could def be improved. A bit less monotone in your flow would be a good start. A bit of mixing in your vocals, with an occasional back track here and there would also help. Your flow ain't bad, but it needs more energy ...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:39 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: corrupted
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2064
Re: corrupted
"i'm needing peace but my minds constantly in war an conflict born from thorns so i'm stuck perpetually doing the wrong shit" "i bomb scripts penned with blood from shredded finger tips from crawling out of darkness an rippin at the stingers tips" This was ill Havoc, damn. The fl...
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:33 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Lonely Road
- Replies: 1
- Views: 486
Re: The Lonely Road
This is pretty good man. You got some nice imagery and emotion laced in here. Your rhyme scheme and vocab should be elevated if u want to bring this to another level. Overall, this is a good read, but yeah flow and vocab could use a bit of improvement.
- Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:37 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Dirty Mirror w/ beat
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1320
Re: Dirty Mirror w/ beat
Nice drop Blok, u definitely got lots of potential. The flow on this was on point throughout, and though it did feel forced at times, the consistency of it kept the interest. You use your vocab well, which is def a good thing. I'd like to hear this as an audio when u get a chance, think if it the ri...
- Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:13 pm
- Forum: Topical Tournament 2010
- Topic: TOPICAL TOURNAMENT FINALS (TRIPLE THREAT)
- Replies: 18
- Views: 7848
Re: TOPICAL TOURNAMENT FINALS (TRIPLE THREAT)
My heart beat rapid, jumpin' like rabid rabbit, ready to ravish the rim and rip it down savage. My life's dream 'd been planted when I was like three, and now ten points was all that separated it from me. It was time to unsheathe my baller WMD weaponry, and bomb these long threes down the gullet of ...
- Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:06 pm
- Forum: Producer's Lounge
- Topic: Rectified
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1348
Re: Rectified
I thought this was real nice. Lots of emotion in it, and if an equally emotional delivery was brought to the flow it would really make this track dope, especially if the flow was kinda rapid fire. It's got a good rhythm to it too, think it would carry a flow well. Well done...
- Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:04 pm
- Forum: Center Of Elevation
- Topic: Breathing Techniques?
- Replies: 13
- Views: 5570
Re: Breathing Techniques?
Yeah, I'd agree with Loon's advice on this one. When I'm writing, I usually try to keep in mind when I'm gonna give myself room to breathe too, occasionally a short pause after an important line can allow for that line to sink into the listener a bit more, and it gives u a second to take in a breath...