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by IntrinsicCadence
Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:19 pm
Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
Topic: Illest's Poet of the Year for 2010
Replies: 1
Views: 1363

Re: Illest's Poet of the Year for 2010

Well shit, glad to see u all appreciate the poetic-ness of my drops. I'll keep em coming...
by IntrinsicCadence
Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:17 pm
Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
Topic: Illest's Most Potential of 2010
Replies: 2
Views: 1732

Re: Illest's Most Potential of 2010

Damn fam, I'm surprised I got so many awards, def appreciate the luv...
by IntrinsicCadence
Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:15 pm
Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
Topic: Illest's Multiple Threat Artist for 2010
Replies: 1
Views: 1365

Re: Illest's Multiple Threat Artist for 2010

I have a feeling Kurse probably got the votes from cats who've been around all year, and I probably got the votes for people who've been around just for the second half of the year. But Kurse is a damn talented emcee and producer, so tying with him in a category like this is definitely an honor.
by IntrinsicCadence
Tue Dec 28, 2010 10:57 pm
Forum: Winners of the Illest 2010 Awards Are...
Topic: Illest's Feedback Award for 2010
Replies: 1
Views: 1388

Re: Illest's Feedback Award for 2010

Glad to know u all appreciatin' the effort I make to give thoughtful feedback in these forums. But I hope a bunch of others step up to outshine me in this category in future months...
I think this should be a monthly award, might encourage people to give more thoughtful feedback...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:07 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Master
Replies: 11
Views: 2156

Re: Master

I liked it, though think it would be improved if ur delivery had more emotion in it. The beat and your lyrics have a lot of latent emotion, but not so much in ur delivery. But, other than that suggestion, I think this is well done, though maybe that first spoken word verse could be mixed a bit bette...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:13 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: twin in minds body
Replies: 3
Views: 766

Re: twin in minds body

Not bad man. I liked that other drop of urs I read yesterday better, but this was pretty solid in itself. The internal rhyming u got going on in some of the lines comes off smooth, and the meanings ur expressing are clear but still leave space for some reflection. Not bad man, keep writting, keep dr...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:10 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: MY LYRICS, RATE AND COMMENT THE NEXT EMINEM
Replies: 10
Views: 3065

Re: MY LYRICS, RATE AND COMMENT THE NEXT EMINEM

I'm not gonna go into detail with this, especially since I don't even know if your even gonna be back around the forums. Now first off, I didn't read this whole piece, long as shit. But from what I did read I think u got potential as a writer. To get more feed in the future, be sure to structure ur ...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:59 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Inner Ear Infection
Replies: 5
Views: 1267

Re: Inner Ear Infection

Alright man, this was pretty good. I thought the first half was better than the second half. You started to go off on some rather strange tangents in the second half, like that whole see/sea/seam/etc process, cuz while I could appreciate your goal to do some wordplay, I didn't really feel how it end...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:46 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: like a dream ft. chelsea
Replies: 5
Views: 1080

Re: like a dream ft. chelsea

This has got some potential, but as others have mentioned there's some ways this could def be improved. A bit less monotone in your flow would be a good start. A bit of mixing in your vocals, with an occasional back track here and there would also help. Your flow ain't bad, but it needs more energy ...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:39 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: corrupted
Replies: 5
Views: 2064

Re: corrupted

"i'm needing peace but my minds constantly in war an conflict born from thorns so i'm stuck perpetually doing the wrong shit" "i bomb scripts penned with blood from shredded finger tips from crawling out of darkness an rippin at the stingers tips" This was ill Havoc, damn. The fl...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 2:33 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Lonely Road
Replies: 1
Views: 486

Re: The Lonely Road

This is pretty good man. You got some nice imagery and emotion laced in here. Your rhyme scheme and vocab should be elevated if u want to bring this to another level. Overall, this is a good read, but yeah flow and vocab could use a bit of improvement.
by IntrinsicCadence
Sun Dec 26, 2010 12:37 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Dirty Mirror w/ beat
Replies: 4
Views: 1320

Re: Dirty Mirror w/ beat

Nice drop Blok, u definitely got lots of potential. The flow on this was on point throughout, and though it did feel forced at times, the consistency of it kept the interest. You use your vocab well, which is def a good thing. I'd like to hear this as an audio when u get a chance, think if it the ri...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:13 pm
Forum: Topical Tournament 2010
Topic: TOPICAL TOURNAMENT FINALS (TRIPLE THREAT)
Replies: 18
Views: 7848

Re: TOPICAL TOURNAMENT FINALS (TRIPLE THREAT)

My heart beat rapid, jumpin' like rabid rabbit, ready to ravish the rim and rip it down savage. My life's dream 'd been planted when I was like three, and now ten points was all that separated it from me. It was time to unsheathe my baller WMD weaponry, and bomb these long threes down the gullet of ...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:06 pm
Forum: Producer's Lounge
Topic: Rectified
Replies: 4
Views: 1348

Re: Rectified

I thought this was real nice. Lots of emotion in it, and if an equally emotional delivery was brought to the flow it would really make this track dope, especially if the flow was kinda rapid fire. It's got a good rhythm to it too, think it would carry a flow well. Well done...
by IntrinsicCadence
Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:04 pm
Forum: Center Of Elevation
Topic: Breathing Techniques?
Replies: 13
Views: 5570

Re: Breathing Techniques?

Yeah, I'd agree with Loon's advice on this one. When I'm writing, I usually try to keep in mind when I'm gonna give myself room to breathe too, occasionally a short pause after an important line can allow for that line to sink into the listener a bit more, and it gives u a second to take in a breath...

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