To Kanye's new instrumental Power: For really much longer than I care to remember I've dared pretenders to witness and just admit their surrender I spit fire like embers, my soul's frozen like winters and my flow's colder than a hockey rink in December My agenda's amended, yes lyrically I've evolved...

DMX's X gonna give it you to ya in 2003 got me into hip-hop and made me wanna start looking deeper because before then I didn't have access to choose my own music and only listened to what my mom played on the radio which was mostly pop music. When I found that song I started doing my own research a...

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The last line was the only one that stood out to me. The whole piece itself was pretty good but I've seen you do better so I was a little disappointed. I did like the topic though, and the rhyme scheme changed up here and there and that kept me entertained. Keep writing bro.

The metaphors were there but some of them were a little simplistic. It's almost as if it was a freestyle because everything is surface level. Take some time and think of some new stuff that you've never heard before (if it happens to be played at least it's original to you). Also I think you can mak...

I use to write poetry a lot when I was younger and then just fell away from it for a while, but after hearing some of the better lyricist that were signed I wanted to start writing more to beats. At first I thought I was alright and I had some average punches but after seeing other people's writtens...

You may have heard my name, you may have heard it once before then you know I prefer to claim, that with verse-wording I'ma Pro I'll conjur verbs up through the floor, then like a surgeon I'ma sew together words and every person that observes it's gonna know The Perfect curse at my flow, cuz they've...

Rondo definitely. He's elevated his game to another level and he'd be the most detrimental player for the Celtics to lose which makes him the Most Valuable.

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My life's tumultuous, full of ups, I've told you this but under thunder I have wandered seen the coldest winters shift. Every storm that forms a rift only reforms my motives quick, and since I've known horrendous trips now I'll unfold tremendous wit. Since the oldeset winner quit I've lived and stri...

This was real sick bro. The three lines that stood out the most have already been quoted above (parrot line, steel chair, shit-with-a-purpose). I thought the lines around those, leading to and after them were great. Definitely wanna see more from you.

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It started out good, in the second line I would have used the word "situation" instead of "simulation" but it still works regardless for the imagery you're trying to convey. wondering if this all is real or just an internal split of a rap journal-ist urban kid a drifter in this s...

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I'm Mentally upset at your lyrical failure at text, your audio's faulty, a mess, instrumental's callin' who's next? A real baller I guess, systematically eat or digest competition, it's missing, so mathmatically yes he's the best Unless the crest of a wave, sways and lays on his chest the ney/nay-sa...