Damm man the flow on this was mad crazy, i had to get in and check it out when i saw it was Ruckus and you aint lost anything have you man, dope drop no doubt about it so many lines that had so much emotion and could really tell the message you had to convey and shit, was a great drop no doubt keep ...

Man this wasnt a bad drop, the mutlies are nice and a not bad vocabulary to kick with it but i think the flow maybe was a little bit choppy in places and somethings put it off like the double around me part, i saw what you tried to do though with the world/whirl bit, but maybe that is just me, keep ...

Damm Q very nice, great to see you still dropping great shit, the lyrics in this were pretty heartfelt and gripped the beat nicely, but everyone is going to have a different flow to the song and I could remove my soul, but I'm awoken, alive with pain I once felt but I won't succumb, knelt to the gro...

Plex back on his BS, yeah this was that good shit, seems as your flow has switched some what from the champion pieces and what not but i was feeling this piece no doubt, the flow was great switching it up, the vocab is something i can always appreciate because thats what i do, i look forward to read...

I'm a take a crack at this no doubt i'll get you something asap

Yeah this shit was dope none the less, so dope made me actually want to leave feed on it after being incredibly lazy n shit, but yeah the beat was catchy from the get go, your hook really topped that off, and the verses were good shit with the flow and lyrically, both of your mixtapes were dope and ...

This is some good shit Murk but yeah i'd be down to vote on this shit, i aint got time to be doing it but i'll help keep it rolling no doubt

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Don't know about this man, too basic i think everyone has to start somewhere though right, i just wasnt feeling the first verse, the second verse was better, though this did seem like more of a poem than a rap i have to be honest, but keep dropping man

This would sound great on a track, no doubt, nice mutlies done well i thought kind of helped the flow no doubt, looking forward to maybe seeing the full track man

Not a bad drop i think maybe sort the flow out so the syllable count matches or maybe it is a audio more based drop but either way if you can find a way to emphasise the flow more would be good, the multies werent bad with the good use of vocabulary, not a great drop cause it was so short but not ba...

This was refreshing man, the mutlies were just like you, but the layout and the flow were new, i suppose thats what you went for was an impressive drop though, you had the vocabulary, the lines in between the lines that set up the rhyme were a dope idea you really did well with this piece man, glad ...

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