sup

welcome to the site. nice lil intro. get active and youll elevate fast

the drop was decent. but theres a song by my homie Loose Logic called
"Losing my Mind" and its one of my fav songs so when i seen the title
i sorta got my hopes up. but welcome regardless 1

the instruments need to be EQd better and volumes adjusted.
it sounds like some of the instruments are clipping.
its ok but it needs more to it than just this.
have a drop, hook etc. but keep doin ya thing

yea this was a nice short piece. pretty smooth thru and thru the lyrics are well used and has a good rhyme scheme I'm standing on a skyscraper screaming FUCK to the world it's a damn shame..I'm feeling like this Because of a Girl last 2 lines were a good closer i felt the multis and pretty much sume...

Imagine never relaxing, you'd mentally crumble I ascended with a splended tremendous rebuttal I've been accused that I ended a couple only reason you hate me is I pretended to love you maybe I did, there's too many memories to juggle I ain't wasting my time on another identity struggle my fav was t...

the lyrics are cool i can tell youre new to this or w/e
but you really need to work on the emotion in it
and learn how to meld it together with the lyrics.
it sounds devoid of emotion and emphasizing the bars
the lyrics could be tweaked too but they had
a rhythm you just need to find how to deliver it

This shits dope gonz, im feeling this one. the clap might have a bit of a reverb but i dont think it takes away from it. and im working on your beat dont worry bout that.

dope

very good piece but in order for me to take the time to break this down and get in-depth with it ill have to reserve my breakdown for when i get off work tom. good piece my man

lmfao why is this thread dead? WHERES DA LINKS BITCHES>?

raw i liked how this sound plus the lil effects u had in make it better. vivid brutal imagery and str8 flow and delivery dope shit keep em coming -- Sat May 05, 2012 6:22 pm -- Step one- seep his breath, so it aint leakin' out his chest Step two- cover the basement with plastic, placed on the rug So...

its not too bad just needs some better mixing or something needs to be adjusted with the highs cause it sounds like theres a lot of clipping an shit. and the beats doing the same thing. but the lyrics were pretty tight and the rap delivery was good. nice shit just gota figure out lil more mixing and...

yea thats whats up my man. i like your beats and they sound well made and pretty dope. but depends on what you wana do with your beats. including leasing and selling out right. i think to BUY a beat depending on the beats quality itself probably 100$. i mean someone out there is bound to buy some be...

yea i kinda agree with dom. this shits fresh though man. stay active and youll elevate. bring heads and return feedback to others also. It ain’t worth trying to persuade you to wade through what I made you You’d get a kick out of my shit too, we probably wearing the same shoe Opportunity knocked so ...

word thanks Majin, who are you anyway? you seem familiar, i use to post at war lab also. but yea like i stated, i didn't really "rap" this i just didn't it as a test run for the lyrics. ill try to step up my delivery for this one. when its finished ill be reposting this. i may have a spot ...

well...honestly i dont have an idea for a hook yet. send me something my way and ill see how well it fits