This was a sick piece, I'm feeling how y'all meshed together
really kept a consistent vibe and made me think whaaaaat
Plex killed it on the first verse I think
but then I read Khan's and that was nice
both of you guys came sickly though I liked it
really nice flows combined together...keep it up

I gotta agree with Kuhler
that L' Fiasco did throw me off
but other then that it was consistent
I was feeling the flow and what you were saying
reminds me of how Biggie would flow
basically cuz thats who I was thinking of
nice drop though my dude..keep it up

This was a smooth piece my dude...the rhymes flowed nicely
the multi usage was consistent and you delivered a dope idea
I was feeling a majority of the beginning then it switched up a little in the middle
but twas still dope...great drop my dude

This was a cool piece, I like the beginning it gives it a eerie vibe
I feel like the idea you brought would make like a great intro
and the beat just kicks in when you start kicking your verses
which seems like a good idea, either way keep writing my dude
nice lil' drop right here

This was cool my dude, had some decent lines here and there
wasn't really consistent with the flow, some lines worked others didn't
I think you just came in drunk one night and started pennin' whatever
so I won't knock you for that, atleast you did what you had to do

This was cool, didn't end how I thought it would've but it works, the way I thought it was going to turn out is he falls asleep and dreams that he/hisself is the killer or maybe thats what you did and just didn't end it right otherwise the feeling in this was cool the way you made me visualized it w...

This was alright, seems like you just started writing need to up your vocab a lot, and work on your multi's this kind of style is easy to do but you just need to know what your gonna say I mean lines like "speak my name, and you just said greatness" or whatever was cool...like in the 90's,...

Scared to dream or just impaired to see the change that was in her and me surely we, could imagine such courtesy but the thought alone is cursing me burning me to the point I'm sure to see the difference and the rebirth of me permanently, never to die or purchase thee reversing me into a position me...

this was pretty nice especially for doing it on your phone
I tried that and always feel like my bars are too long
turns out they aren't otherwise you came with some sick multi's
a nice little flow that was easy to keep up with and some nice usage of meta's
a nice little warm up bro...keep writing

The words grew from root forming the tallest of trees to be cutted ^ to be cutted -Sounds odd to me, maybe I'm reading it weird cuz no one else has mentioned it, but it doesnt compute well in my brain. For the sake of rhyming ok, but sentence or statment wise, it took away from the picture because ...

This was a sick piece, the way your working your series is nice the ideas you keep bringing show the growth of your skill keeping yourself on your toes the smooth usage of your flow keeps me reading and the way you put your story together is nice really putting it down my dude, I'm feeling this beca...

This was pretty deep my dude, you been putting some work in
keeping your pieces moving along pretty nicely
showing some emotion and showing some skill
the usage of your multi's is picking up nicely
and the way your weaving your words together is consistent
keep working my dude

I can see some growth in the way you write..I approve the idea you brought here is pretty good, maybe if you broke it down more and etched a little more detail into the ideas of stardom and then kept it going like that and in the last verse made the statement that thats not what you want you might h...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bRMyrsOnt3s&feature=related[/video] The words grew from root forming the tallest of trees to be cutted mixed up and gutted, formed into paper, spun into another budget grasped by society, switching hands while others say they loved it those that touched it, ...

Hey...thanx bro...bump for part two