3-0 ME..K.O.

ok...alot of kauses lines seemed played although he did use a fair amount of flips..he had no real multis either and not very hard of his punches because of the simplicity...JAY came with a few more clever lines although a couple came off soft...Jay deffinitely used more multis and had effective nam...

SOLID BATTLE YA'LL..ok..ER...your verse lost alot for me cause it sounded more like a song to me then a diss...the shorus was a good idea although it didn't really appeal to me...nice swagger in your voice although some of words lost it for me..breathe control seemed on point with delivery but no li...

you came deep on this and i like that..but when you have killer lines which you do in here it makes the softer lines standout more...this almost gave me a poetry feel in certain areas..and real nice with the multis..not too much seemed forced...that line that loon quoted i agree could have been made...

IF MIC don't mind I got KUHLER....i'll do audio right now if needed but quality is low....holla....murk beat me before too but I'm down for a rematch

As my life force fades and my spirit looks upon an empty shell I feel like it's a dream cause I never believed in a descent to Hell Or the ascent to heaven..not even God or Satan It all just seemed like an fulfilled promise waitin' To think that a holy being could create us with the wave of a hand S...

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set it up..i'll drop tonight or by tomorrow night at latest

DOWNLOADED the MP3 version....dope so far..i'll give you proper feedback after I'm done listening to it...LOL..on do or die...I'm from WEST MICHIGAN...who was that that said he was from there...i live there now..LMAO

I'm down if he is

I check in...16 lines is cool with me//8 bars....set it up and get a topic

3-0 MIC S...good battle bro

thanks ya'll and yeah i just tossed it together but my problem has always been being mono tone...and this cheap ass computer stick mic don't help...LOL..i didn't mix anything down or filter it or anything..so i'll get to it....i just slapped this together after work at like 3 am...but i appreciate t...

Please...i could use feedback on everything but sound quality...i want brutal honesty
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my bad...24 hours is good..due time -- Fri Jun 03, 2011 7:23 am -- I'll put a strangle hold on S,yeah,I'm gripping this MIC I'm sick when I write and your just a "bitch that ain't tight" That's probably why when my punches come it feels like a "gang bang" I'll leave this "pu...