Yup, everyone got their own lives. Nobody expects you to lurk around the site 24/7. Do what you can and we'll be here to give you props and also tear your shit apart in order to help you elevate. Welcome to the hobby of Hip Hop, it gets more fun the better you get. Leave feedback on people's work wh...

Yo the imagery on this is tight as fuck. I could mentally envision all the shit you were talking about and the flow/rhymes were also dope. In my head I was just envisioning this crazy ass city with all this shit going on, and my imagination took it from there.

9/10 on this piece, keep writin!

Yo I really enjoyed this a lot, and I'm not the type of person to give empty compliments. I think you got definite talent and you should save up and invest in some electronic engineers and programs like Izotope Ozone, Protools, Waves, and there's definitely some great mic filters and other various s...

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I like this. You have some good imagery going on with a lot of your lines, but constructive criticism: don't get lazy and give up on bars. think of metaphors and more complex rhymes till you're displaying all of the elements: wordplay, metaphors, multiple rhyme schemes, flow, etc. Overall good piece...

Woah. Your vocab is out of control. And normally I would say that is a good thing, but it seems over the top. I've met professors from Ivy League colleges who don't speak like that and either you're heavily involved in some strange book reading or you're using way too much Thesaurus Online. Slow it ...

I'll take it. You got the .wav files for these beats???

y'all didn't think the shooter on the bar like backwards day line was hot?
i thought that one was cool at least..

anyway. if you really want me to break it down, i will, but i think it's pretty obvious that shooter just came pretty terrible this time around.

MVGT Enlightened

Thank you all for the feedback, I really appreciate it. Like Momeijah said, my flow needs to be worked out in some places, so I'm not quite ready to record it, but it definitely will be at some point. Thanks again.

Left feed for: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/feeling-fine-vt25905.html#p192391 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-narcissist-monumental-ft-kuhlerblynd-vt25873.html [center]First off, thank you for reading this. I just wanna say that even tho the rhyme schemes are hella simple, I didn't wanna ...

Haha Haz, I've followed a lot of your different work and I think your various beef shit has been hilarious, but REGARDLESS of what anyone says, don't let them fool you. Your bars are hard as fuck and with a little tweaking to make them sound a little cleaner and well thought out, you'd have some cla...

MonuMental, you straight up went in. Your punchlines were tight, the flow went hard (yes it might have trouble on a standard beat, but acapella it works great), and the complexity of the rhymes is mind-blowing. Kuhlerblynd, you're also sick as fuck. I liked MonuMentals a little better, because some ...

DAMN. best shit i've read on here in a long time.

looking for a vet, no newbies, no champions or hall of famers either. just a good battle.

first of all, sick drop Anti. second of all, how come every time someone does ANYTHING on illest, people always start with politics and bandwagons Man I am too down to battle anyone of these cats, sad thing is they would never accept so I might just post sumthing, and anti I wuld want to see u write...