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by Phasewon
Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:52 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Misery Hates Company
Replies: 7
Views: 4949

Re: Misery Hates Company

Dope, rhyme schemes were perfect, transitions were consistent and solid, flow was flawless "Just to hide her neck and arms everytime he left a scar/ Every scrape and bruise escaped from view without a question mark/" dope internal rhymes, couple forced multies here and there, ending also s...
by Phasewon
Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:45 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Cursed
Replies: 7
Views: 4496

Re: Cursed

Dope shit, solid multies, flow was on point, no complaints. "I have been too strong to weaken my words there's no defeating the urge Say cold turkey then you're speaking absurd I'm so nice on the mic my inner demons disturbed Like i'm hitting them with punishment they ain't even deserve" ^...
by Phasewon
Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:40 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: .... Still Lurking
Replies: 3
Views: 5181

Re: .... Still Lurking

Nice shit, lines were stretched as fuck, but I guess that doesnt really matter if it's just text, multies were on point, good shit.
by Phasewon
Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:54 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Phasewon- Flying Daggers
Replies: 15
Views: 31703

Re: Phasewon- Flying Daggers

'Preciate the feed, I'm open to any recording tips or suggestions, still getting the mixing and mastering shit down, mic: Blue Yeti, not bad.
by Phasewon
Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:45 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Phasewon- Flying Daggers
Replies: 15
Views: 31703

Phasewon- Flying Daggers

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-w-freestyle-studio-track-numba-2-vt25645.html#p191015 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/we-at-war-ft-anti-vt25633.html Fucking around with the new mic, first recorded joint, ever. [soundclick]<div style="width:473px; border:solid #999999 1px; background-ima...
by Phasewon
Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:37 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Replies: 3
Views: 2989

Re: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!

Ok, your quality isn't bad, the mixing levels were good, but lyrically and vocally you could practice a bit more, sharpen up the pen work before you record, keep at it.
by Phasewon
Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:27 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: WE AT WAR ft Anti
Replies: 10
Views: 6045

Re: WE AT WAR ft Anti

That beat is fire, lyrics were on point, the hook did seem rushed and choppy with the flow and delivery, but keep knockin' out joints and all that will sharpen up with time.
by Phasewon
Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:18 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Captain
Replies: 2
Views: 1093

The Captain

Instrumental: [video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnWY0AOStds[/video] Check the instrumental, dumbed the lyrics Down a lil' to fit the beat. [Phasewon] I'm losin' my passion for scrappin' now I'm shootin' and stabbin' Come through with the magnum and blast you in the booth when you rappin' Any du...
by Phasewon
Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:05 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: quick 8...inroduction to my style
Replies: 3
Views: 1142

Re: quick 8...inroduction to my style

Solid shit, some nice multies, good opener and closer, stay at it.
by Phasewon
Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:54 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: word
Replies: 1
Views: 477

Re: word

Nice verse, shit was ill with the rhyme switch ups, fell off a lil toward the end, I was looking for something to quote but nothing in particular stood out, nice use of multies and rhyme schemes nonetheless.
by Phasewon
Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:30 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: just thoughts
Replies: 4
Views: 1452

Re: just thoughts

Not bad for a beginner(I'm assuming), the structure was a lil' off, rhymes were pretty basic but I'm feelin' the message you're getting across, stay at it.
by Phasewon
Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:27 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Red, White & Blue Skidmarks
Replies: 1
Views: 810

Re: Red, White & Blue Skidmarks

"Government power creates a public that scatters// So my subject matter is only about subjects that matter//" ^^Perfect opener. This shit was dope, the first verse clearly stood out to me as the best, the first and second were dope but seemed more rushed, as well as the complexity of the r...
by Phasewon
Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:28 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Big Pun- You Ain't A Killer (Remix)
Replies: 6
Views: 1682

Big Pun- You Ain't A Killer (Remix)

Got bored and mixed some shit...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ucLdqvOnCc[/video]

Also did a Big L joint...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50KCqCqjKyI[/video]
by Phasewon
Sat Jan 22, 2011 9:59 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Illest's Greatest Shoutbox Moments
Replies: 9
Views: 2027

Re: Illest's Greatest Shoutbox Moments

Phasewon - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:46 am I actually rub a dirty dog's asshole on a dirtier dog's asshole and lick away, genius! Rejiem Eom - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:08 am i do that too, just without the peanut butter Phasewon - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:07 am I lick peanut butter off of DOG'S assholes, step ya g...
by Phasewon
Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:50 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Fetch A Pail of Water
Replies: 9
Views: 1734

Re: Fetch A Pail of Water

Nice shit, the bars were stretched as fuck but I guess that ultimately doesn't matter when you're just writing for text. simple multies yet effective punchlines(which is most important in a battle/diss joint) so this was some dope shit for what it was.

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