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- Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:52 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Misery Hates Company
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4949
Re: Misery Hates Company
Dope, rhyme schemes were perfect, transitions were consistent and solid, flow was flawless "Just to hide her neck and arms everytime he left a scar/ Every scrape and bruise escaped from view without a question mark/" dope internal rhymes, couple forced multies here and there, ending also s...
- Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:45 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Cursed
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4496
Re: Cursed
Dope shit, solid multies, flow was on point, no complaints. "I have been too strong to weaken my words there's no defeating the urge Say cold turkey then you're speaking absurd I'm so nice on the mic my inner demons disturbed Like i'm hitting them with punishment they ain't even deserve" ^...
- Sat Mar 24, 2012 6:40 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: .... Still Lurking
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5181
Re: .... Still Lurking
Nice shit, lines were stretched as fuck, but I guess that doesnt really matter if it's just text, multies were on point, good shit.
- Sun Mar 18, 2012 4:54 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Phasewon- Flying Daggers
- Replies: 15
- Views: 31703
Re: Phasewon- Flying Daggers
'Preciate the feed, I'm open to any recording tips or suggestions, still getting the mixing and mastering shit down, mic: Blue Yeti, not bad.
- Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:45 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Phasewon- Flying Daggers
- Replies: 15
- Views: 31703
Phasewon- Flying Daggers
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/the-w-freestyle-studio-track-numba-2-vt25645.html#p191015 http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/we-at-war-ft-anti-vt25633.html Fucking around with the new mic, first recorded joint, ever. [soundclick]<div style="width:473px; border:solid #999999 1px; background-ima...
- Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:37 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2989
Re: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Ok, your quality isn't bad, the mixing levels were good, but lyrically and vocally you could practice a bit more, sharpen up the pen work before you record, keep at it.
- Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:27 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: WE AT WAR ft Anti
- Replies: 10
- Views: 6045
Re: WE AT WAR ft Anti
That beat is fire, lyrics were on point, the hook did seem rushed and choppy with the flow and delivery, but keep knockin' out joints and all that will sharpen up with time.
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:18 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Captain
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1093
The Captain
Instrumental: [video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnWY0AOStds[/video] Check the instrumental, dumbed the lyrics Down a lil' to fit the beat. [Phasewon] I'm losin' my passion for scrappin' now I'm shootin' and stabbin' Come through with the magnum and blast you in the booth when you rappin' Any du...
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 11:05 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: quick 8...inroduction to my style
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1142
Re: quick 8...inroduction to my style
Solid shit, some nice multies, good opener and closer, stay at it.
- Fri Mar 18, 2011 10:54 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: word
- Replies: 1
- Views: 477
Re: word
Nice verse, shit was ill with the rhyme switch ups, fell off a lil toward the end, I was looking for something to quote but nothing in particular stood out, nice use of multies and rhyme schemes nonetheless.
- Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:30 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: just thoughts
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1452
Re: just thoughts
Not bad for a beginner(I'm assuming), the structure was a lil' off, rhymes were pretty basic but I'm feelin' the message you're getting across, stay at it.
- Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:27 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Red, White & Blue Skidmarks
- Replies: 1
- Views: 810
Re: Red, White & Blue Skidmarks
"Government power creates a public that scatters// So my subject matter is only about subjects that matter//" ^^Perfect opener. This shit was dope, the first verse clearly stood out to me as the best, the first and second were dope but seemed more rushed, as well as the complexity of the r...
- Tue Jan 25, 2011 11:28 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Big Pun- You Ain't A Killer (Remix)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1682
Big Pun- You Ain't A Killer (Remix)
Got bored and mixed some shit...
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ucLdqvOnCc[/video]
Also did a Big L joint...
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50KCqCqjKyI[/video]
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ucLdqvOnCc[/video]
Also did a Big L joint...
[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50KCqCqjKyI[/video]
- Sat Jan 22, 2011 9:59 am
- Forum: The Lounge
- Topic: Illest's Greatest Shoutbox Moments
- Replies: 9
- Views: 2027
Re: Illest's Greatest Shoutbox Moments
Phasewon - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:46 am I actually rub a dirty dog's asshole on a dirtier dog's asshole and lick away, genius! Rejiem Eom - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:08 am i do that too, just without the peanut butter Phasewon - Tue Jan 11, 2011 12:07 am I lick peanut butter off of DOG'S assholes, step ya g...
- Tue Jan 18, 2011 9:50 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Fetch A Pail of Water
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1734
Re: Fetch A Pail of Water
Nice shit, the bars were stretched as fuck but I guess that ultimately doesn't matter when you're just writing for text. simple multies yet effective punchlines(which is most important in a battle/diss joint) so this was some dope shit for what it was.