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Dream

Audio, definitely could.

Text, Nope.

Dream

Yes.

I'd go down in history.

..

Question: Is there something you (Lawgix) are trying to tell us?

=P

Dream

Wow. Well. You inspired someone to write a piece. That's probably the best compliment you can ever get. I loved this. This is my first time reading a piece from you, and I am about to go search for more. You painted me a clear, yet very disturbing, vision. Each line held endless emotion. Such creat...

Dream

Hm.

I think you are on the right track, really.
Emotion was there. Topic's very relatable for most.

I'd suggest maybe using a spell check, before posting.
As multiple spelling errors can really throw readers off.

Also, lose the colors.
Especially the neon greens, ew.

Props!

Dream

Wow.

From this anger
I have grown
From this selfishness
I am no longer alone

This piece has such a simple format,
Yet, it's lines include such deep emotion.

It's a very sweet piece.

Love!

Dream

I really enjoyed this piece.
Extremely deep, and quite descriptive.
It was a great concept,
You painted a very clear image.

The only issue that I found was the flow.
But. Maybe I was reading it wrong..

Oh! & The title.
Perhaps use the last line?.

Overall, Love!

Dream

Here's da puppy we got @ da crib his name is Zero. He looks like a lil wolf I call em golden wolf or super sayian lol. Man my wifey drove like krazy da day we went 2 go see em. I told her 2 get em if she wanted 2. She kinda deserved gettin' 1 no lie she's a hard worker. http://a8.sphotos.ak.fbcdn.n...

Dream

Alvin wrote:

Love.

Dream

Meh. Yes.

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