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Shadow's Fading But Memory's Never Ending, Crying In Silence My Heart's Is Slowly Breaking Thought's Devouring My Every Movement, I'm Silently Choking, Shaking I Cant Control This, There's No-more Hoping Mind Crazy ,Gently Grazing Lost Memories, Life's In Piece's Allot Of People Hate Me, Feeling Lik...

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Alright Im Orfadox 21 From Birmingham U.K....Just Here To Write And Hopefully Pick Up A Few Tips....

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