the structures fine, my flow makes it work without soundin forced or anything. like habitat rhymes with matter fact, n other shit u might not have picked up on. take my word for it

jus wonderin if ur saying it like tusk-e-g lol. cool read tho

smooth read man, i feel u put ur swag on it an i appreciate the flow. whats the from the land of oz line mean?

trees is my habitat, habitual smoker, from the canopy im a serious joker, matter fact you can call me sarcastic toker, midnight flights fulla papers like folders, splinter cell smoker, covert, hooded up, cobra, good enough roller still gettin pro-er, roll game proper, twist like copter leaves that f...

My mind runs, i rap in my sleep freestyle in my dreams wake up to more weed get baked like grannies cookies i go dumb like snookie fuck what yah think, put fear in yah boy like monsters inc, plz, understand fully, ur the kid, im sully, surely u shit yah pants, i split the swish n stuff in some plant...

fuckin raw homie, i like the whole elevated idea as i myself try to achieve this. humans are fucked, were aliens! the moon, dark makin love to light line is too raw

good shit, not my cuppa tea tho dig? too sad lol, maybe if i was in a sad mood... hope the stories not about you bro! if so good luck n shit

i smoke weed and rap, often at the same time. my producing skills r shitty so im working on that so ill be able to record my own shit, right now i cant even get my recordings to sound right... which is annoying. napalm fire make ya skin burn n stomach turn n cold sweat, they are no us, jive turkey c...

the last line is a little weak, i just didnt believe in your passion. make me believe damnit!

its a little simple my dude

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also white people shouldnt say nigs in their raps, try a smarter word, nig isnt the only word out there yah know

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im, lit like a lantern, light like a phantom, split the swisher like an atom, roll the sticks n let my dogs fetch em, i got mean green like gremlins, what u rolls gizmo, pitiful, what i rolls medicinal, eyes red, cherry pastry fillin, hoverin like spaceships chillin, abductin cows n shit, experiment...