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by Defiance
Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:10 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Warm Up
Replies: 9
Views: 3269

Re: The Warm Up

yeah dude!!! i liked this,, been a while since i've seen ya arroud. b this was a str8 piece for sure solid multis and really engaged the reader. nice to see you still dropping fire man My words from a furnace, quick to burn without notice and the fame's earned when I word it Don't have to discern th...
by Defiance
Sat Jan 07, 2012 10:41 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Just sayin
Replies: 8
Views: 3481

Re: Just sayin

dude i liked this piece i like your inner rhymes and flow.. i like the desperate lover tip and the i can't escape you direction you were going.. a good narrative to relationships, dysfunction al be it, but a good strong suited rap too your styles very east coast by the way.. very biggie writing styl...
by Defiance
Sat Jan 07, 2012 8:21 am
Forum: New Users
Topic: NEW
Replies: 8
Views: 5880

Re: NEW

welllcommm man
by Defiance
Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:06 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: social reject (Life Stories vol 2)
Replies: 4
Views: 1644

social reject (Life Stories vol 2)

his name was tim meadows he grew up in the ghetto he liked smoking crack and watching hoes in stilettos a troubled youth, that lies in the face of the truth hes scared of the world outside so he shakes in his boots addicted to the fast lane, money, hoes, clothes and the weed he drinks til he sleeps ...
by Defiance
Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:57 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
Replies: 7
Views: 3126

Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)

Upping this beastrill
by Defiance
Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:56 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Woodlands
Replies: 6
Views: 2315

Re: The Woodlands

dude i liked this it was a great narrative to the forrest and what humans do to it, theres one bar i would have changed they believed it stacked the work, and went back to rehearse i would have like this they believed it stacked the work, and went "back rehearsed" just would have sounded b...
by Defiance
Thu Jan 05, 2012 9:43 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Cash to Hash
Replies: 3
Views: 1439

Re: Cash to Hash

could use more emotion in the verses. i like the chorus, could use more layers to it, beat and lyrics could use a hike in level. morly towards the vocals better mixing.. more confidence and emotion, or emphasis on the lyrics.. which i have a hard time with.. it makes it sound like your talking verse...
by Defiance
Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:23 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 2017
Replies: 4
Views: 1736

Re: 2017

lol this shit went hard.. all immortal technique like..

i liked the message behind the meaning.. felt real like a grain of salt.


i like the middle two stanzas the best


way to be man

Revolutionary but gangsta tre tru!
by Defiance
Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:11 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Wonder Woman
Replies: 6
Views: 2509

Re: Wonder Woman

I believe, life’s like russian roulette you never know exactly what to expect liked that it flowed great your rhyme strings are long, kinda looks like you have a lil trouble transitioning between rhymes, i find if i start the bar with the rhyme off the last than that lets me transition seamlessly.. ...
by Defiance
Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:08 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Heart of Gold
Replies: 6
Views: 2622

Re: Heart of Gold

i liked this had a good feel to it..

a love story if you will

you seem to more poetic than rap style. which is fine, but with some more practice i think this could go well on audio.

and girls on the mic are always hot.,, lol

good shit keep writing
by Defiance
Thu Jan 05, 2012 2:22 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
Replies: 7
Views: 3126

Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)

thanks for the solid feed
by Defiance
Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:11 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Knowledge...short freestyle
Replies: 3
Views: 1899

Re: Knowledge...short freestyle

lol

Tre's getting down wit text.. is it raining upwards did the sky fall??

Lol

Good lil key i like the concept could easily be elaborated on..

varty niiice :clap:
by Defiance
Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:48 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: When guessing
Replies: 9
Views: 3606

Re: When guessing

class me with the people on a crash course of madness uncovering new grounds like i'm passport established like that Dude you always got some good shit coming out you brain box it re-damn-diculous i liked it good message stayed on topic. didn't drown out the stylings with non sense good shit bro
by Defiance
Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:29 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: This Feelin
Replies: 27
Views: 20086

Re: This Feelin

dude i love this track right here

had me bobbing my head.. going uh uh uh na nah na nah
lol

nah i dug it yyou road the beat like a caddy on airbags.

beat reminds me of the cartoon rugrats for some reason.. good drop my man..

keep rhyming
by Defiance
Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:38 am
Forum: Center Of Elevation
Topic: Ad Libs VS Dubs In Vocals And Emphasizing Your Verses
Replies: 7
Views: 7169

Re: Ad Libs VS Dubs In Vocals And Emphasizing Your Verses

:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:


Good show

but thats funny that people don't know that.. shit i learned that from p.diddy back in the day... lol


Good job though with the picture.

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