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- Tue Jan 10, 2012 2:10 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Warm Up
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3269
Re: The Warm Up
yeah dude!!! i liked this,, been a while since i've seen ya arroud. b this was a str8 piece for sure solid multis and really engaged the reader. nice to see you still dropping fire man My words from a furnace, quick to burn without notice and the fame's earned when I word it Don't have to discern th...
- Sat Jan 07, 2012 10:41 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Just sayin
- Replies: 8
- Views: 3481
Re: Just sayin
dude i liked this piece i like your inner rhymes and flow.. i like the desperate lover tip and the i can't escape you direction you were going.. a good narrative to relationships, dysfunction al be it, but a good strong suited rap too your styles very east coast by the way.. very biggie writing styl...
Re: NEW
welllcommm man
- Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:06 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: social reject (Life Stories vol 2)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1644
social reject (Life Stories vol 2)
his name was tim meadows he grew up in the ghetto he liked smoking crack and watching hoes in stilettos a troubled youth, that lies in the face of the truth hes scared of the world outside so he shakes in his boots addicted to the fast lane, money, hoes, clothes and the weed he drinks til he sleeps ...
- Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:57 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3126
Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
Upping this beastrill
- Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:56 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Woodlands
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2315
Re: The Woodlands
dude i liked this it was a great narrative to the forrest and what humans do to it, theres one bar i would have changed they believed it stacked the work, and went back to rehearse i would have like this they believed it stacked the work, and went "back rehearsed" just would have sounded b...
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 9:43 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: Cash to Hash
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1439
Re: Cash to Hash
could use more emotion in the verses. i like the chorus, could use more layers to it, beat and lyrics could use a hike in level. morly towards the vocals better mixing.. more confidence and emotion, or emphasis on the lyrics.. which i have a hard time with.. it makes it sound like your talking verse...
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:23 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 2017
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1736
Re: 2017
lol this shit went hard.. all immortal technique like..
i liked the message behind the meaning.. felt real like a grain of salt.
i like the middle two stanzas the best
way to be man
Revolutionary but gangsta tre tru!
i liked the message behind the meaning.. felt real like a grain of salt.
i like the middle two stanzas the best
way to be man
Revolutionary but gangsta tre tru!
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:11 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Wonder Woman
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2509
Re: Wonder Woman
I believe, life’s like russian roulette you never know exactly what to expect liked that it flowed great your rhyme strings are long, kinda looks like you have a lil trouble transitioning between rhymes, i find if i start the bar with the rhyme off the last than that lets me transition seamlessly.. ...
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 4:08 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Heart of Gold
- Replies: 6
- Views: 2622
Re: Heart of Gold
i liked this had a good feel to it..
a love story if you will
you seem to more poetic than rap style. which is fine, but with some more practice i think this could go well on audio.
and girls on the mic are always hot.,, lol
good shit keep writing
a love story if you will
you seem to more poetic than rap style. which is fine, but with some more practice i think this could go well on audio.
and girls on the mic are always hot.,, lol
good shit keep writing
- Thu Jan 05, 2012 2:22 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
- Replies: 7
- Views: 3126
Re: Broken Home (life stories vol. 1)
thanks for the solid feed
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 11:11 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Knowledge...short freestyle
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1899
Re: Knowledge...short freestyle
lol
Tre's getting down wit text.. is it raining upwards did the sky fall??
Lol
Good lil key i like the concept could easily be elaborated on..
varty niiice
Tre's getting down wit text.. is it raining upwards did the sky fall??
Lol
Good lil key i like the concept could easily be elaborated on..
varty niiice
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:48 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: When guessing
- Replies: 9
- Views: 3606
Re: When guessing
class me with the people on a crash course of madness uncovering new grounds like i'm passport established like that Dude you always got some good shit coming out you brain box it re-damn-diculous i liked it good message stayed on topic. didn't drown out the stylings with non sense good shit bro
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:29 am
- Forum: The Booth
- Topic: This Feelin
- Replies: 27
- Views: 20086
Re: This Feelin
dude i love this track right here
had me bobbing my head.. going uh uh uh na nah na nah
lol
nah i dug it yyou road the beat like a caddy on airbags.
beat reminds me of the cartoon rugrats for some reason.. good drop my man..
keep rhyming
had me bobbing my head.. going uh uh uh na nah na nah
lol
nah i dug it yyou road the beat like a caddy on airbags.
beat reminds me of the cartoon rugrats for some reason.. good drop my man..
keep rhyming
- Wed Jan 04, 2012 9:38 am
- Forum: Center Of Elevation
- Topic: Ad Libs VS Dubs In Vocals And Emphasizing Your Verses
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7169
Re: Ad Libs VS Dubs In Vocals And Emphasizing Your Verses
Good show
but thats funny that people don't know that.. shit i learned that from p.diddy back in the day... lol
Good job though with the picture.