You gotta a good flow man ... it sounds really breezy. You got a good grasp on your message and where you need to be on the beat. Homeboy can flow for sure. What's up with recording a verse over a recording though ;( I mean that's never gonna sound good ... too removed. Even if you threw it together...

So .. they mixing sounds good, the beats OK, but man ... You sound waaaayyyy too much like "Lonely Island" ... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VLnWf1sQkjY and they make comedy songs ... so your delivery is almost impossible to take seriously. I mean ... you have to hear the similarity right...

Alright ... Anti ... You're flow is all over man ... most of it is in the writing. You don't have to force yourself into everything you write man ... What you could try doing in just Bee-Bop to the beat ... no words ... just syllables and timing ... find what would sound good in a spot and make the ...

This thing dead then?

@ Plex - Thanks again for this envirnonment and I hope you read what I wrote in the spirit intended. In no way am I criticizing your efforts here ... I was just worried that a good thing might go to waste. Keep up the good work man!

I'll send some help your way

I enjoy this site. Thank you for putting it together, maintaining it, and paying to have it hosted. I drop songs in the booth and try to give solid feedback. But ... If you are going to go to all of the effort to create this environment, promote it, amass the following that you have, and advertise o...

Just listened to this again ... I mean ... this is a stand out song that would hold it's own with top tier competition. Very Impressive. I'm really interested how you guys squeezed that great sound out of that vocal on the hook. It's really smooth and I'd like to experiment with whatever plug-ins or...

Alright Alright. We all come for good feedback, trying to get better, so I'll let my ears speaks. Flo - TreTru - There are aren't many misteps in the timing. The writing fits the pace well. Strangely Pest, who didn't sound awkward at all on "Acro/Acra" ha ha (never got it straight)has some...

Wanted to play around with the Lexicon Reverbs ... and I like Adele so ...

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What's a contingency track?

I really like when I come on here and hear a track that makes me stop and listen. When you rap, I stop typing ... wait ... ... You've got great enunciation that smacks the beat with perfect timing which shows your comfort with the mic and your own material ... Not only that ... you're trying to say ...

Ha ha ... Pissin' on their cornflakes ... Really great mixing and clean channels on the tracks fellas ... That first verse is really smooth .. nice scheme and constant rhymes but not gibbrish ... Solid writing! ... That hook with the "I'm that nigga" is ehhhh .... I woulda liked longer ver...

@ Lawgix ... Huh?

There was a post awhile back proposing (what I thought was) this tourney ... I said something like "Sounds interesting, I'm in." I thought that was me signing up. Yesterday I ask Anti how that track we were working on together is coming along and he points me here. I was surprised this thi...

Wait a minute. ???? - A bunch of us sign up for an "audio league" - A few of us are "randomly" picked for round one. - The beat that is "randomly" selected just happens to be the same one that Antimatter/Lawgix sent to me like a month ago; which I wrote n' recorded a ve...

Dude! ... Like I said ... I love your beats. Thanks for throwing it on here ... I had fun with it.

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