Hey thanx peeps

I GOT THIS BASS 'BEAT' WITH A SNARE AND A DRUM, NO CARE IN THE WORLD WHEN YOU GEARED OFFA RUM, AND MOST NIGGAS FEAR WHEN YOU YOUNG, THEY GIRL THINKIN' YOU CUTE CAUSE YOU PREPARED FOR THE RUN that was a dope line my dude glad to see your still around here dropping you still got that flow of yours the...

I thought this was actually pretty cool, didn't really have much going for it but I dig what your trying to do with your piece, your tryna add a vivid spectrum to it tryna provoke a different way of writing, you will need to pick it up though and sort it out if anything if you re-write this, break u...

this was a slick piece my dude you brought a whole different vibe with this then again I don't think I've read any of your writtens for awhile, but you always got something good regardless I can imagine you spitting this on a crazy ass beat, just to remind people what rhyming is all about, some sick...

There you go again Haz, styling on these fools, I'm really digging the style
you always got some nice rhymes and some memorable quotables in your pieces
always seem to be consistent when it comes to that, so good job my dude
keep writing cuz you keep a nice balance to the board

This was another nice piece from you my dude, I'm really feeling this piece though I always liked story pieces, sometimes people really can't follow through with their ideas though you kept a nice product right here though, your word usage is still improving the vivid details you add to this really ...

this was a nice piece, you really held your own on this one... it's a cute little love story, kinda reminds me of some Lauryn Hill which is always good to see, you kept a consistent use of your words in this and kept on topic, a smooth piece nonetheless, I'd quote some lines but I feel it'd take awa...

This was actually pretty crazy, the multi usage in this was bananas you really kept it consistent and made it flow together pretty nicely I can imagine you spittin this pretty fast and going in on a beat just to make a statement pretty nice piece, can't wait to see how long you keep this series goin...

This was pretty nice my dude, I like these cypher type pieces it brings that old Hip Hop staying true, and for the consistency to stay in it... makes it twice as better, it lets you know that you guys weren't just randomly spittin' you though of a concept to bring to people and let it stick out in t...

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lol

word dawg

-- Sat Jul 30, 2011 8:08 am --

bump until I find time to drop something new

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