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I'll critique you...
first get a better title
second defiance works....if your good at it
third don't get to emotional it messes with your writings
fourth you will die horribly
fifth so will I
sixth rebuttal that

I was feelin' this I was also feelin' that line I read earlier
I think it was quoted already the recording drinks line

dope shit man
keep it up ~1~

I'ma target, I am the knife, the arrowhead I am heartless I bear no life where the barrell rests I care no less, I care no more, I am the evil I am the eagle, I am the hawk I am pushed to see you I am pushed to find you I am sick but I won't heal you they seal me, then hurt me, they drop me but conc...

I liked this it came out purdy good
a nice read if I say so myself

What up y'all I go by many names
but I'm just droppin' in to drop some dope lyrics
the illest y'all goin' to feel it