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by The Man
Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:54 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Hidden Thoughts (Poetry)
Replies: 5
Views: 2189

Re: Hidden Thoughts (Poetry)

Just so you know, the rule is, every post you drop, you have to comment on two other pieces,

one drop = 2 return feeds.

Welcome to Illest. :D
by The Man
Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:21 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Suicidal Intentions
Replies: 5
Views: 1493

Re: Suicidal Intentions

This was alright, had a nice poetry feel to it, would probably belong in the poetry section more than here. Has potential.
by The Man
Tue Feb 15, 2011 8:20 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Im Fallin
Replies: 3
Views: 1088

Re: Im Fallin

Not feeling it, need to work more on the basics.
by The Man
Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:50 am
Forum: Interviews
Topic: Interview with IntrinsicCadence
Replies: 8
Views: 3945

Re: Interview with IntrinsicCadence

:angry-banghead:
by The Man
Tue Feb 15, 2011 7:47 am
Forum: Illest Suggestions
Topic: Battle clarification, please
Replies: 8
Views: 5247

Re: Battle clarification, please

People aren't quite the brightest.
by The Man
Wed Feb 09, 2011 1:08 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Crazy Love - eLmo - REMASTERED 3-15-2011
Replies: 11
Views: 3336

Re: Crazy Love - eLmo

With your voice being so deep, you have something, you just need some really good mixing, without good mixing your voice isn't coming off right, you could kill the southern sound with your choice of substance. There is something there, you just need some coaching and you'll get it, I seriously hear ...
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:39 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Free Verse
Replies: 3
Views: 939

Re: Free Verse

Was alright, seemed a bit rushed, keep practicing though, that's all I can say.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:36 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Lost My Mind
Replies: 14
Views: 2877

Re: Lost My Mind

I liked the whole besides the "But when I pry, something inside denies the motion/" -- seemed forced, think you can do better, ad something killer right there. Put some piff in that line, have Drunken Jesus sniffing his computer screen after reading it. Besides that, good multies, good dro...
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:31 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Ignorance Is Bliss.
Replies: 3
Views: 902

Re: Ignorance Is Bliss.

Had some alright multies, the lysol line is horribly forced. Not bad.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:30 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Demsfightinwordz
Replies: 3
Views: 1313

Re: Demsfightinwordz

Eh, not bad, could use some multies for starters.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:27 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: 2011 Til Infinity
Replies: 7
Views: 2842

Re: 2011 Til Infinity

Keep working on those rhymes, you got some multies popping up, just try to get more of a flow to the rhymes and not force them. Good flow though.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:26 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: ShysT - Master of Deception
Replies: 9
Views: 2540

Re: ShysT - Master of Deception

Beats good, flow is good, recording quality is shit though, beef up that mic and you'll be able to work with something good.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:24 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Get Away (Under construction)
Replies: 5
Views: 1757

Re: Get Away (Under construction)

Need better equipment, you got a voice that can work, just need waaaaaay better recording equipment.
by The Man
Tue Feb 08, 2011 4:18 pm
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Marvin(MarvinTheMastermind)
Replies: 9
Views: 2428

Re: Marvin(MarvinTheMastermind)

Wasn't feeling it at all.
by The Man
Thu Feb 03, 2011 7:02 am
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Anderson Cooper Vs. Egypt
Replies: 2
Views: 1068

Anderson Cooper Vs. Egypt

Journalists covering protests in Cairo, including CNN's Anderson Cooper and two Associated Press correspondents, have been roughed up in the crowd. Cooper says he and his crew were attacked by supporters of President Hosni Mubarak on Wednesday. CNN later said no one was seriously hurt. Two Associate...

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