Yeah bru ye gotta make shit easy to read, itz a bit complicated as is and will put off readers, start a new line after every bar structure shit properly thatz all u need
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- Sun Apr 10, 2011 10:44 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: NO TOMMORow BY J STEEL,WRITTEN AND RECORDED,HERES A VERSE FR
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1112
- Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:15 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Saved by music
- Replies: 8
- Views: 2471
Re: Saved by music
Dope, to sum it up, everythin' perfect here, 8 / 10 imo
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- Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:09 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: stay straight
- Replies: 2
- Views: 799
Re: stay straight
Itz good, tho I'd give it an honest 6
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- Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:04 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: My Spot
- Replies: 1
- Views: 783
Re: My Spot
Nice lines, good flow
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- Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:01 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: connection
- Replies: 1
- Views: 596
Re: connection
This is ok, v.inspiring
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- Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:49 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: That triumphant flow
- Replies: 1
- Views: 633
That triumphant flow
Ok, this my first post here, justa lil some'in some'in, appreciate any feed. Uh I define anomaly, rhyme cosmically, properly open a monopoly coppin properties, skills ill for emceein my philosophy, like a prophecy, ain't no stoppin me blockin me from succeedin, I being on top of thee, thee at my fee...
- Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:30 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: P.eacefully E.ntering S.ilent T.imes
- Replies: 8
- Views: 1762
Re: P.eacefully E.ntering S.ilent T.imes
this is dope, real deep shit
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- Fri Apr 01, 2011 8:25 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Something That's Bugging Me
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1076
Re: Something That's Bugging Me
Feeling this, dope flow nice words, good shit
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