Enders ... alright man ... there's some potential here for sure ... the mix is OK. From like :44 - :56 you hit a really nice groove. You strike me as one of those guys that has some soul and wants to stretch out ... try new things ... but is being boxed in by the lyrics you've already set out for yo...

I like those first few lines ... sounded from the heart. This overall song just has a real breezy feel to it ... There's something about it ... maybe it's the old-schoolish beat or something but ... I really like the vibe of it ...

Nice shit fellas!

@Enders - Just a hobby. Never been on stage or sold a song ... I just love rhymin', writing, and recording. I know I'm a misfit .... No hip-hop heads would take me seriously ... ha ha ... and probably vice-versa. @TreTru - First off. Sweet video. That shit's dope man ... Do you! ... and yeah ... you...

This song is rugged ... rough around the edges ... The mids on the instrumental and vocals sound like they're cranked up ... pretty intense. the flow from the first verse is solid ... kinda like that nasty dude from D12. the mixing delay could be tightened up a few milliseconds on that one. The seco...

This song is about how ... no matter how much you achieve ... or how often ... It's so hard to stay content when human nature kicks in ... that itch flares up and you have to keep raising the bar to keep yourself happy. Lyrics will help on this one: Evolution’s endeavor to keep us ill content is imp...

Yeah ... alright man! ... Lotta good stuff here. You did really well with the doubles ... they help enuciate your punches and you timed em well. I like tracks where cats just rap ... It's funny that you found about 50 rhymes for passion ... I should write some of these down ha ha... You're definatel...

This beat is cool! ... Perfect vibe for the content of the song. Man, I feel like this beat is begging for a female vocal. You should call this chick up and get her in the studio, ha ha. Everything sounds pretty good. I like the samples at the beginning of the second verse. This second verse has a r...

Well ... Cool. I don't come on here to step on peoples feelings or bring others down. I have no interest in it. I only wanna get help and give it. It bummed me out that I seemed to piss you off. At the end of the day, we're strangers who rely on each other for honest feedback. I'm going to continue ...

Damn ... The mixing in this is pretty interesting cause your voice is really deep and can't be easy to capture. But you did a good job with it. The writing is really playful and even though you don't have Eminems voice ... the flow, delivery, and rhyme scheme is very similiar to his earlier stuff .....

Whoa! Whoa! ... tap the brakes man. I didn't realize sounding like a white kid was the meanest, nastiest thing you could say to someone. ha ha. Take a close look at my photo man! If I hadn't uploaded it ... you'd know ... Doesn't mean I wanna sound like every other motherfucker ... and I'm pretty su...

Cool man. Thanks. It's kinda tough because everything I've got is on Soundclick at the moment, but they have threatened to shut my page down if they find another mixtape song on there. That's not cool. But it's a lot of work moving and uploading 50+ songs. So... I'm considering buying a Soundcloud p...

@ cyanidesyn ... Honestly ... Thanks for the feedback man ... I'm happy when anybody gives me a spin ... I know you've got some skills and I'm trying to get better ... so could you elaborate on ... "bump my head good work i like tha premises 2 now this is tha negative tha singin was kinda y i s...

This beat is fuckin' sick ... the bass is bringing my building down ... I can hear the fire department on their way. Man ... I feelin' this first verse ... Nice enunciation ... cool editing on the verse ... nice delay "The Bullshit" "Be so damn stupid" ... in the hook sounds too ...

I like the beat too ... The girl dub is really nice. OK. I can appreciate what your coming with ... kind of a measured delivery ... and you stick to it ... which would make the writing more challenging ... but it sounds a bit labored ... I'm thinkin' it over and it's like ... what makes it fall flat...

This'll be the first track on that mixtape I've been talking about. The concept is different songs for different ages in my life ... This one is (Age 14) .. so that's where it'll kick off ... As always - Thanks for giving it a spin! - any feed appreciated ;) [soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/cyan-na...