Okay not bad..Topic was an alright choice, some of the shit could have been stated a bit better. Some metaphors/similes could have been alot better. But some shit was just true story, so it still connected. Not bad man

This was cool, topic could have been elaborated on a bit more. Felt the flow could have been a bit smoother. But topic wise, good choice...Rip for your boys, good to see some more heart felt and real shit...

Was good dogs...Came here to battle, work on multis...But the shit ain't bad...


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can you center on this forum?