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Okay not bad..Topic was an alright choice, some of the shit could have been stated a bit better. Some metaphors/similes could have been alot better. But some shit was just true story, so it still connected. Not bad man
- Tue Feb 26, 2008 8:07 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Mind quicker than the Hand
- Replies: 12
- Views: 920
This was cool, topic could have been elaborated on a bit more. Felt the flow could have been a bit smoother. But topic wise, good choice...Rip for your boys, good to see some more heart felt and real shit...