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by Sir Kevin O Shea
Wed Sep 14, 2011 11:58 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Orfadox Vs Comeback Kid (TOPICAL) Orfadox wins KO
Replies: 10
Views: 661

Re: Orfadox Vs Comeback Kid (TOPICAL)

CBK - You showed me potential in this battle. I just have to help you fix the structure. It makes sense if a person reads your verse but it's ugly to look at. Storytelling - Orfadox: Had a more complete story. Flow - CBK: It doesn't look good but he is natural with his mutli usage. It flows better w...
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Tue Sep 13, 2011 12:30 pm
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Who wants to battle me for a roster spot?
Replies: 4
Views: 239

Re: Who wants to battle me for a roster spot?

The title of the thread is a joke based off of my name. lol I just want a battle.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Tue Sep 13, 2011 6:46 am
Forum: Callout Section
Topic: Who wants to battle me for a roster spot?
Replies: 4
Views: 239

Who wants to battle me for a roster spot?

7-8 bars
4 day deadline since I can be busy these days./

Quality opponents only, no weaklings, rookies or blakedowns.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Mon Sep 12, 2011 9:16 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Barack O'Drama (My Civil Rights Story)
Replies: 11
Views: 576

Re: Barack O'Drama (My Civil Rights Story)

Could you mentor me? I can't write classics like this. Alvin, don't be mad because this man could teach you some lyrical skills.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Sun Sep 11, 2011 1:21 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: Highway To Hell
Replies: 5
Views: 328

Re: Highway To Hell

I enjoy the work that was done here. This makes me smile.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Sat Sep 10, 2011 7:40 am
Forum: Illest Topical Tournament 2011
Topic: Enlightend vs 3rd String QB (FINALS) 3rd wins 5-0
Replies: 11
Views: 1315

Re: Enlightend vs 3rd String QB (FINALS)

<t>A young lady named darlene with stark dreams and a porcelain smile<br/> allows the winds from Heaven to pour in her pores for a while<br/> with her arms out and feet together like prepared for a crucifiction<br/> this tribulation will feed the urge thats her true addiction<br/> the majestic count...
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Fri Sep 09, 2011 4:10 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays
Replies: 5
Views: 406

Re: 88SkyLink - multis, punches & wordplays

I will give you credit, this was pretty enjoyable to read.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:51 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-
Replies: 13
Views: 661

Re: All I Want ft. Panda by -Skit-

I listened the song earlier. Nice job, this is very entertaining. The flow goes well with the beat. Nice beat selection too.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Wed Sep 07, 2011 10:25 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental
Replies: 7
Views: 453

Re: SHEET OF ARMOR (The Maneater Edition) FEAT. MONUmental

Kuhler: I like the AZ style flow you have on this. This displayed a great usage of multies.

Monu: Consistant as usual, you never go lower than the standard you set.

The content makes me smile with happiness.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:36 am
Forum: Classic Scriptures
Topic: A Series Of Unfortunate Events
Replies: 11
Views: 1125

Re: A Series Of Unfortunate Events

Monumental, you are one of the greats. This is a piece of deepness.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:10 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Photosynthesis
Replies: 9
Views: 645

Re: Photosynthesis

I give credit and hype to this well written poetic expression.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:32 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Blake Downs -vs- Static (Blake wins KO)
Replies: 7
Views: 534

Re: Blake Downs -vs- Static

<t>Punches: Blake<br/> Flow: Static<br/> Personals:Tie<br/> Enjoyment: Blake<br/> <br/> Vote: Blake<br/> <br/> Static, you have potential but like I have told a few others, when you battle you have to battle. When I say battle I don't mean write a diss verse which can be more relaxed but a battle ve...
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Mon Sep 05, 2011 12:34 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: i break spirit's not mics... 4 bars is enough...
Replies: 2
Views: 289

Re: i break spirit's not mics... 4 bars is enough...

They know who the superior crew is E. lol

This 4 bar buffet of punchlines makes me smile.
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:44 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Proverb vs Baron Enders (Baron WIns ko)
Replies: 11
Views: 725

Re: Proverb vs Baron Enders

<t>Fish? <br/> <br/> Punches: Baron, I feel like he is the only one who really tried to use any real punches.<br/> <br/> Flow: Pro, due to shorter bars.<br/> <br/> Personals: Baron's personals are better stated.<br/> <br/> Enjoyment: Baron, his verse is the kind of verse you write for a match up, wh...
by Sir Kevin O Shea
Sun Sep 04, 2011 7:08 am
Forum: Closed Audio Battles
Topic: -Skit- Vs. Loon E Lou (Loon wins KO)
Replies: 12
Views: 886

Re: -Skit- Vs. Loon E Lou

Punches: Loon
Flow: Skit
Control: tie
Enjoyment: Loon

Vote: Loon

You both had audio quality down so that made the voting easier. Skit, you have a lot of potential so build off of this.

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