both of you need to post 2 links to battles that you voted on if there are no active battles ready for votes leave feed on 1 written and post the link.... 24 hrs to post link(s) or the thread will be locked until they are sent to me... thanks

Pest wins ko... closed and updated

both of you need to post 2 links to battles that you voted on if there are no active battles ready for votes leave feed on 1 written and post the link.... 24 hrs to post link(s) or the thread will be locked until they are sent to me... thanks

48 hrs to post then this will be closed

i will battle who ever, 4 bars, just set it up.... 48hrs house rules

lol but i bet its simple for you now that you know how

my daughter just some simple color editing

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Storytelling: Enders ... Shit was down right sick from start to finish really had me engaged... Imagery: Quix .... Used better descriptive language... I could fully picture what each writer put down but quix edged it Creativity: Enders.... The ending on this was real real creative I wasn't expecting...

Let's get this posted fellas 24 hrs.... Then closed

Vote... JDR... more complex rhyme scheme, his punches finished.... redux ur punches didnt hit very hard at all, concepts were ok just no umph put in them ...

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I may need another day... I was hoping this would be due on a Friday or Saturday but I can prolly write for tomorrow night at the latest

i agree on the cat sweep to cbk he had a all around better verse but he really came nice on the first couple of bars, i see flashes of serious elevation, then get disappointed by run on mutie bars with no real punch or lyrical content... Jsteel... i feel like u need to step up man you have been batt...