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by MonuMental
Tue Nov 29, 2011 12:38 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: not named (unfinished)
Replies: 7
Views: 586

Re: not named (unfinished)

I like it Big Meik. Stop being such a stranger and come around and put a little more work in. We need more female emcees around here.
by MonuMental
Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:31 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Ego
Replies: 2
Views: 265

Re: Ego

Dude, you got some mad fucking writing... This was pretty clean, some of it didn't feel so on topic, but it IS open to interpretation, I'm assuming. With that being said, I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Next time, with a piece such as this, all I'd say is try to make it longer. Dope, stay up.
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 8:01 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Memories
Replies: 9
Views: 756

Re: Memories

Yeah, I agree with Glam on this one. A few times it threw me off, but nothing really off setting, it was a refreshing lil piece. Nice to see some emotional content here, always takes the mind back. Stay up.
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 2:12 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: So Far...
Replies: 1
Views: 470

Re: So Far...

I love Illest, life is fine, me neither, me too, I don't lose.
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 1:04 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: THEIR,THEY'RE.THERE
Replies: 9
Views: 618

Re: THEIR,THEY'RE.THERE

CBK, elevation is a steady and gradual thing, and I feel like you've done a great deal of it in a short amount of time, so props for that. Mostly, I say fuck a structure, just write how it comes, but I'm picking up on some pretty sick flow in this piece and some nice multies, too. Keep at it, bruh. ...
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:16 am
Forum: The Booth
Topic: This Feelin
Replies: 27
Views: 2442

Re: This Feelin

Lol this shit was crazy off the wall, but like everyone else said, it was pretty much on point with everything from flow to presence to presentation. I "LOL"'d a good bit cause this shit was deranged. Haha. Good shit, man. Props.
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 4:02 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: My road
Replies: 2
Views: 290

Re: My road

Yeah, I read this before, and I've got to say that, personally, I thought you wrecked it. It's full of too many quotables for me to even begin quoting. I wouldn't suggest changing a thing, it was on point with multies and the flow was pretty fucking smooth. The content also stayed true to the title,...
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 26, 2011 3:56 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: bel canto
Replies: 2
Views: 320

Re: bel canto

I've got to be completely honest. This shit was the most off the wall, idiotic piece of trash I've ever read, my guy. And I'm normally nice with feed, I can normally look over the inherent flaws of every lyricist in order to allow for the growth of their respective writing styles and room for elevat...
by MonuMental
Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:13 pm
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: Truth or Dare
Replies: 37
Views: 3317

Re: Truth or Dare

Lol, it's not possible for me to do that, at the moment, though. Anything else that doesn't require special clothing? Or special anything, for that matter. Haha. Cause I'm at work.
by MonuMental
Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:06 pm
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: Truth or Dare
Replies: 37
Views: 3317

Re: Truth or Dare

Let me in on this junk. Lol. Dare me to do something.
by MonuMental
Tue Nov 22, 2011 5:50 am
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: WORD ASSOCIATION!
Replies: 160
Views: 9266

Re: WORD ASSOCIATION!

Queer
by MonuMental
Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:50 am
Forum: Cyphers
Topic: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz
Replies: 30
Views: 3312

Re: SMOKE SESSION CYPHER spit about smoking plz

Menu rolls the pine to stoke his mind, With two bowls behind, a smokin line, I choke, it's fine, my throat's divine, Indo designed through hope and time, Get the Garcia broke the gar and me elope, To steepest slopes, far and deep we blow, Unarmed we beat ghosts of stresses we know, Blessed with gree...
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:20 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: yo
Replies: 5
Views: 488

Re: yo

Right off the bat, this newcomer is noticable. I actually dug this style/technique, bruh. It's as though I don't see it very often, and alot of it was pretty tight. Despite the structuring being odd to me, I like it. Drop some more, but remember to feed two pieces to every one dropped. Rules and all...
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 19, 2011 5:16 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Do you think...
Replies: 25
Views: 2025

Re: Do you think...

MonuMental can also refer to himself from the third person, and pretend to be his very own imaginary secretary. And edit his post to make it seem as though it's been edited...which it has...

**Edit.
by MonuMental
Sat Nov 19, 2011 12:58 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: Funny User Pics
Replies: 40
Views: 2858

Re: Funny User Pics

LOL @ Mine, I'm Captain Kirk in this bitch!!!

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