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by MonuMental
Sun May 20, 2012 4:43 am
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: The Dream
Replies: 5
Views: 781

Re: The Dream

This is some good writing, and if it was done as long ago as you say, it could only have gotten better with age. I could actually picture the wilderness you described, and feel the warmth of the life you showed such yeaning for. I know the cold pain of those frozen tears, and I've seen it on faces I...
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 11:10 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Dominoland (The written)
Replies: 6
Views: 725

Re: Dominoland (The written)

I felt this piece was rather sick. You had them multies snapping the whole time, pretty much. The content was amusing, presented in a fun way. I dig that. A lot of good imagery too. A well written piece, right here, dedfinitely well worth the read. Perhaps, we can go on another trip to Dominoland in...
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 6:31 am
Forum: Where The Sidewalk Ends
Topic: Summer plans?
Replies: 6
Views: 682

Re: Summer plans?

I just hope to maybe fit a few of the puzzle pieces together. Hopefully they'll form at least a portion of the road that I need to travel down. While I'm doing that, I'll most definitely be high as hell, though. Lol.
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 6:28 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "Day Of The Disdained"
Replies: 3
Views: 482

Re: "Day Of The Disdained"

Your vocab is inredible, man. What can I say, I incorporate a lot of it into my pieces and I just enjoy seeing it done by other artists. This was a nice piece with a clearly defined message, a fact for which I salute you. Here's what I thought were the hardest bars: It's only a verse, it ain't only ...
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 6:25 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Fly Away
Replies: 4
Views: 444

Re: Fly Away

I agree with all of the above, it was a good piece with some solid instances of imagery, it had a few good multies thrown off in it, it flowed well, for the most part, and you seemed to be consistent with the topic, which I'll admit, I had to interpret personally. Nothing's wrong with that, I think ...
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 6:11 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: an old peice I came across<need feed>
Replies: 1
Views: 367

Re: an old peice I came across<need feed>

both sides lose their FAITH,---"Who was brought HERE TO DIE?"---// For every PRAYER that reached the HEAVENS,a BOMB fell from the SKY// That bar went so fuckin hard, my dude. But yeah, I recognize it has to be old, it's not bad by any means, but i've seen evidence of your elevation since this time a...
by MonuMental
Sat May 19, 2012 6:04 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Visions
Replies: 4
Views: 544

Re: Visions

Visions should be priority to those who Got Eyes I disagree with the bullshit most cops try Soberness is a fairy tale it never stops by Sometimes I forget what its like to be not high I like the schemes you opened up with here. Cool end multies. Spiritual beyond belief, though God is real He sent me...
by MonuMental
Fri May 18, 2012 6:56 am
Forum: Illest Visual Arts
Topic: Rough Day in Class...
Replies: 4
Views: 586

Re: Rough Day in Class...

The second one is pretty sick, as well.
by MonuMental
Fri May 18, 2012 3:26 am
Forum: Illest Visual Arts
Topic: Rough Day in Class...
Replies: 4
Views: 586

Re: Rough Day in Class...

I'm thinking it's pretty fresh. The "fuck you" has a nice font, and I like how the color in it pops against the skull. I'm really digging the texture on the skull, kinda looks like some kind of fabric, or like it's heavily cross hatched with bone. Nice. You should whip up your ole buddy here a fresh...
by MonuMental
Wed May 16, 2012 3:57 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Reminisce
Replies: 2
Views: 392

Re: Reminisce

Ok, here's what it is. It's an interesting piece. I think you have a strong and diverse vocabulary to call on, and that always stacks up in your favor. On the multi tip, I didn't see too many instances of strong usage, this could have been intentional, or not. I wouldn't sweat technicality so much a...
by MonuMental
Wed May 16, 2012 1:46 am
Forum: Hip Hop Discussion
Topic: Doms vs Kooly Bop
Replies: 4
Views: 827

Re: Doms vs Kooly Bop

Doms ripped a buncha cats outta the frame with like no effort at all. Dude has some genius shit hatching in that noggin of his. I give him full praise and props for comin with it as hard as he does, especially in a freestyle format.
by MonuMental
Tue May 15, 2012 2:55 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
Replies: 11
Views: 915

Re: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd

Thanks for the feed, Pearl. To answer your question, I wrote without a beat, I always write without a beat. I'm pretty sure KB did, as well. Of course, if we needed to, I'm sure it wouldn't be a problem to catch and keep a rhythm on an instrumental that matched the mood for this piece.
by MonuMental
Tue May 15, 2012 2:20 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
Replies: 11
Views: 915

The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd

[center] MonuMental Many view me as a Narcissist, the truth shouldn't be too far from this, In a booth spit fire, I'm an arsonist, my movements prove that I'm hard to hit, I shoot for the moon where the target sits, high stakes looking for a card to grip, Part your lips, go and scar your wrists, if ...
by MonuMental
Fri May 11, 2012 3:00 pm
Forum: The Lounge
Topic: BODYBAGS ENTERTAINMENT
Replies: 5
Views: 578

Re: BODYBAGS ENTERTAINMENT

It would be a positive thing to give them a new home. Activity is life.
by MonuMental
Fri May 11, 2012 9:27 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Second Icarus
Replies: 2
Views: 250

Re: Second Icarus

I'd love to feed this, I thought is was a great piece. But you need to feed at least two pieces per post, it's the rules. I do it, as does every other artist here. Feed, and receive. Ok, now that that's handled, here goes. I thought this was an awesome piece, wonderfully intricate while well rooted ...

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