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by NoVeL
Fri Mar 04, 2011 6:54 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Adultery
Replies: 3
Views: 320

Adultery

It could never be you and I, as far as the eye can see always blind from tears and the scars are kinda deep over bullshit, constant headaches, no nights of sleep. Frustrating when you love, the love's putrid from a mile used to think we going strong, holidays we held it down but the best part is YO ...
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:09 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Replaced
Replies: 6
Views: 787

Re: Replaced

Despite whatever gave you the motivation to write this drop FL, in my books you can never be replaced. :)
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:08 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: dark presence
Replies: 4
Views: 485

Re: dark presence

fight me, wrap me up in flames and ignite me/
take my soul into his clutches, and let the mice feed/
on my rotten corpse, deep below the worlds surface/
killed by the devil just for tryna find my purpose/
Very descriptive
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:04 pm
Forum: The Poet's Stage
Topic: Be
Replies: 7
Views: 679

Re: Be

The signs that line the sides
of my concrete vision read:
'Malleable, wait for time
to solidify the elements.'
Meanwhile, I'm learning
to breathe in the moment
and appreciate the present
for everything it offers me.
What will become shall be.
Hott shit, had an emotional feel to it. Keep droppin'
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:00 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Suicidal Intentions
Replies: 5
Views: 364

Re: Suicidal Intentions

blood runnin off my arms to the end of the fingers heart cryin out for someone to love it i guess you can call it a singer blood runnin low face losin its glow curtins closin its the end of the show All you needed to end the piece, everything else was unnecessary. Pretty nice drop, keep droppin'
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:57 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Death (intro)
Replies: 7
Views: 412

Re: Death (intro)

my arms are a sure slaughter

but there is a need for me to go a bit farther

i grip the blade harder and slice my jugular vein
You had something here.. Elaborate!
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:52 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: I Feel
Replies: 3
Views: 227

Re: I Feel

Thanks fam, I appreciate it and I will do
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:46 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: TIME!!
Replies: 5
Views: 428

Re: TIME!!

Ok.. Few good lines. 99.999% of that made no sence to me wat so ever. also theres like 3 or 4 different topics on this. One lines serious then another is on sum weird sorta humor shit.
U need alot of practice
Yep
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:41 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 1st one
Replies: 5
Views: 409

Re: 1st one

Vi-lent like high kicks J be on that high shit, climb it,I'm ripped tryin out this rhyme shit, Belive it you fags throwin up sickness like bulimics with aids.
This is like a heading... with NO BODY, lol complete the drop dude!
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:39 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Gettin Better
Replies: 12
Views: 939

Re: Gettin Better

Not bad at all, could use some touching up. Otherwise your best line
time for neck slashin, back lashin,

seatbelt better be fastend

cuz here enters da Southern Livin Assassin
Keep droppin'
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:35 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: 24 liner.. Worth recording?
Replies: 6
Views: 448

Re: 24 liner.. Worth recording?

Kause, Try to sway from generic lines like Like how i met your mother huh, im ted mosby/ She loves how i rap so thats how your mother knows me/ Everyone does that nowadays. But, your dopest line here was Like what? You know what im about if not/ My names kause and im here to put the south west up/ ,...
by NoVeL
Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:24 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: I Feel
Replies: 3
Views: 227

I Feel

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5T_AF_BXijo[/video] Lyrics: I feel like I'm fucked, currently stuck in a casket of muck, rappin' is such, relief for my battle enough battlin' up hill, strapped with a gut, feelin' practically half of a nut ready to pull a grenade and blow myself up, maybe I'm u...
by NoVeL
Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:45 pm
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Rugged vs. Creative (Rugged Wins DQ)
Replies: 6
Views: 563

Re: Rugged vs. Creative (LOSER GETS BANNED)

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e6gnm-ft_EI[/video] Lyrics: This faggot is gay go stand in the rain, he's asking for pain, a disgrace when you ask him his name I'll blast em' in vain, these cannons'll flame to take his life and shots'll put his casket to shame 'fulla shit' people gassin' his f...
by NoVeL
Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:02 am
Forum: Closed Text Battles
Topic: Kau The Lion VS NoVeL (Kau Wins KO)
Replies: 10
Views: 645

Re: Kau The Lion VS NoVeL

yo kau came with it -flow- Tie punches- the lion -personals- tie -enjoyment- the lion -multis- the lion -metas-the lion -overall vote KAu the lion Just came harder i was feeling his structure, flow and punches way more than novel but good battle none the less 1-0 kau the lion UPPING Kinda hard to b...

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