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Re: New here
Welcome. Bring your friends bring your grandma bring your dog we don't discriminate (unless you knock on our door with religion's penis in your mouth)
- Wed May 22, 2019 2:48 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: No longer me
- Replies: 3
- Views: 4503
Re: No longer me
The rhymes we're lackluster to me but that likely isn't the focus. There seemed to be a good sense of emotion. Definitely a relatable subject for many and bits and pieces illustrated images. Sounds like it was off the top and I can respect that. There's more power and captivation in a story from the...
- Wed May 08, 2019 1:40 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Last Ripple - Realm
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3138
Re: Last Ripple - Realm
Thanks. This was just whatever came to mind as I typed. Kind of had no real direction besides just a big exhale of "welp this is it. This is where we're at now. So let me just pay homage. Oh and what's this.. (reads my old content) damn I was trash, I should've listened to Jesus." Lol if p...
- Wed May 08, 2019 1:35 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Ten Valiums
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5103
Re: Ten Valiums
,"Every night I’m depressed fighting the stress
Even at the height of my success
My life was a mess full of chaos and dread
I pray in my head that I wake up in bed"
The main bars that stood out. There were a few interesting things said here and there but overall it was very spotty.
Even at the height of my success
My life was a mess full of chaos and dread
I pray in my head that I wake up in bed"
The main bars that stood out. There were a few interesting things said here and there but overall it was very spotty.
- Sun May 05, 2019 2:04 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Last Ripple - Realm
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3138
Last Ripple - Realm
Let's be honest, this place needs to remain in the rubble, none of us made it, a bunch of no names with fame in a bubble, if i'm center stage, it's to juggle, almost every single day is a struggle, beneath the thunder and clouds we drown under the crowd, but somehow, we're all the same collective dr...
- Sun May 05, 2019 12:16 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Ten Valiums
- Replies: 4
- Views: 5103
Re: Ten Valiums
never knew the site was back up, so im super late on the feedback, but i personally was not feelin this, rhymescheme is there but just not my cup of tea personally, i couldn't vibe with more than half of it
- Sun May 05, 2019 12:14 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Hello Stranger
- Replies: 5
- Views: 13246
Re: Hello Stranger
im sure everyone can more or less relate to this, i was actually hoping for some multi syllabic rhymes but that's just me, and this is you