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by PMP_Or_Better
Thu May 24, 2012 11:15 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "I Hate Work"
Replies: 2
Views: 2614

Re: "I Hate Work"

I can definitely agree with what your saying so I understand. I do read a lot and I also do use a thesaurus as well. You made a great point and I appreciate the feed. I just don't know, maybe being extremely complex isn't the thing up here on the Illest. Thanks for your honesty though.
by PMP_Or_Better
Tue May 22, 2012 10:02 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Eldritch Storm
Replies: 2
Views: 3478

Re: Eldritch Storm

Well I just listened to the beat, and that verse you wrote seems to have a pretty fast cadence to it. I would love to hear you spit it, because for the most part everything you said sounds pretty dope in my head. I love your vocabulary and the delivery was great too. I just think that some lines wou...
by PMP_Or_Better
Tue May 22, 2012 9:38 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "I Hate Work"
Replies: 2
Views: 2614

"I Hate Work"

[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center][center] To belabor to the neighbors enabling me to make it Through anal assimilated groups daily is an insatiable task For the kangaroos, rapacious and fat From the gorillas who will kill us to voracious giraffes On the daily I'm paraded with a ...
by PMP_Or_Better
Sat May 19, 2012 11:26 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Visions
Replies: 4
Views: 11032

Re: Visions

Based on everything that was said above it seems like you have even written better pieces then this one, but it doesn't matter. I'm glad that you're maintaining it's always good for a lyricist to keep writing. This piece is still great though, I like your awareness of the world and your nonchalant a...
by PMP_Or_Better
Sat May 19, 2012 11:14 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Dominoland (The written)
Replies: 6
Views: 8147

Re: Dominoland (The written)

Dominioland!!! Sounds pretty dam fun lol. This piece was great, I enjoyed your imagination a lot.The imagery, punchlines, multi's and all. I look forward to reading more of your written work. Kudos!
by PMP_Or_Better
Sat May 19, 2012 7:53 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "Day Of The Disdained"
Replies: 3
Views: 5948

Re: "Day Of The Disdained"

Thank you it means A LOT. Especially coming from a lyricist such as yourself. I really appreciate it. I will stay up.

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by PMP_Or_Better
Fri May 18, 2012 1:41 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "Day Of The Disdained"
Replies: 3
Views: 5948

"Day Of The Disdained"

[center]Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]This day is a day of the disdained The day of the mislaid things that have been maimed The day of the assuaging poets who will get played The vigorous ignorance that really can afflict brains Intense pains to be a proficient big name In ...
by PMP_Or_Better
Fri May 18, 2012 1:25 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Moonlight
Replies: 1
Views: 1837

Re: Moonlight

Imagery is your middle name! I loved the pictures you painted with this piece and your song went right to the beat. Which was another thing I loved, Jules-Watts is dope. The only negatives I have about this piece was that at times I couldn't follow certain lines, it seemed like to many words were in...
by PMP_Or_Better
Fri May 18, 2012 1:10 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: Fly Away
Replies: 4
Views: 3386

Re: Fly Away

I liked this piece and the message you were getting across. Every line was on beat and that instrumental sounds like the feelings you were trying to express. So overall, it was a pretty nice piece I just wish your multi's could've gotten in there a little more. That's just me though. Keep writing!!!
by PMP_Or_Better
Fri May 18, 2012 8:27 am
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: "The Space Aviator"
Replies: 1
Views: 4478

"The Space Aviator"

[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]If I ever the knew the basic fundaments of aeronautics I would dare a pilot to embark on all my cherished knowledge On a mechanism I invented to prepare the body For a blast off into space like a military rocket To share the goblet of a...
by PMP_Or_Better
Thu May 17, 2012 3:58 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: quick freestyle
Replies: 3
Views: 5899

Re: quick freestyle

I like. Honestly, I just wish it was more presentable, but that's just me. Good multi's and good punchlines. I could feel the charisma while reading it lol. You should spit it over a beat or something.
by PMP_Or_Better
Thu May 17, 2012 3:53 pm
Forum: Written Rhymes
Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
Replies: 13
Views: 46594

Re: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd

This collaboration is a monument that was built by two great emcees lol. I'm wack I know, but the synergy between both of you guys was awesome. I feel like both of the verses related to the topic and brought that heat. Multi's were popping on both sides. Good shit.

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