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- Thu May 24, 2012 11:15 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "I Hate Work"
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2614
Re: "I Hate Work"
I can definitely agree with what your saying so I understand. I do read a lot and I also do use a thesaurus as well. You made a great point and I appreciate the feed. I just don't know, maybe being extremely complex isn't the thing up here on the Illest. Thanks for your honesty though.
- Tue May 22, 2012 10:02 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Eldritch Storm
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3478
Re: Eldritch Storm
Well I just listened to the beat, and that verse you wrote seems to have a pretty fast cadence to it. I would love to hear you spit it, because for the most part everything you said sounds pretty dope in my head. I love your vocabulary and the delivery was great too. I just think that some lines wou...
- Tue May 22, 2012 9:38 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "I Hate Work"
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2614
"I Hate Work"
[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center][center] To belabor to the neighbors enabling me to make it Through anal assimilated groups daily is an insatiable task For the kangaroos, rapacious and fat From the gorillas who will kill us to voracious giraffes On the daily I'm paraded with a ...
- Sat May 19, 2012 11:26 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Visions
- Replies: 4
- Views: 11032
Re: Visions
Based on everything that was said above it seems like you have even written better pieces then this one, but it doesn't matter. I'm glad that you're maintaining it's always good for a lyricist to keep writing. This piece is still great though, I like your awareness of the world and your nonchalant a...
- Sat May 19, 2012 11:14 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Dominoland (The written)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 8147
Re: Dominoland (The written)
Dominioland!!! Sounds pretty dam fun lol. This piece was great, I enjoyed your imagination a lot.The imagery, punchlines, multi's and all. I look forward to reading more of your written work. Kudos!
- Sat May 19, 2012 7:53 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "Day Of The Disdained"
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5948
Re: "Day Of The Disdained"
Thank you it means A LOT. Especially coming from a lyricist such as yourself. I really appreciate it. I will stay up.
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- Fri May 18, 2012 1:41 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "Day Of The Disdained"
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5948
"Day Of The Disdained"
[center]Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]This day is a day of the disdained The day of the mislaid things that have been maimed The day of the assuaging poets who will get played The vigorous ignorance that really can afflict brains Intense pains to be a proficient big name In ...
- Fri May 18, 2012 1:25 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Moonlight
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1837
Re: Moonlight
Imagery is your middle name! I loved the pictures you painted with this piece and your song went right to the beat. Which was another thing I loved, Jules-Watts is dope. The only negatives I have about this piece was that at times I couldn't follow certain lines, it seemed like to many words were in...
- Fri May 18, 2012 1:10 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Fly Away
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3386
Re: Fly Away
I liked this piece and the message you were getting across. Every line was on beat and that instrumental sounds like the feelings you were trying to express. So overall, it was a pretty nice piece I just wish your multi's could've gotten in there a little more. That's just me though. Keep writing!!!
- Fri May 18, 2012 8:27 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: "The Space Aviator"
- Replies: 1
- Views: 4478
"The Space Aviator"
[center] Practice Makes Perfect Or Better... [/center] [center]If I ever the knew the basic fundaments of aeronautics I would dare a pilot to embark on all my cherished knowledge On a mechanism I invented to prepare the body For a blast off into space like a military rocket To share the goblet of a...
- Thu May 17, 2012 3:58 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: quick freestyle
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5899
Re: quick freestyle
I like. Honestly, I just wish it was more presentable, but that's just me. Good multi's and good punchlines. I could feel the charisma while reading it lol. You should spit it over a beat or something.
- Thu May 17, 2012 3:53 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
- Replies: 13
- Views: 46594
Re: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
This collaboration is a monument that was built by two great emcees lol. I'm wack I know, but the synergy between both of you guys was awesome. I feel like both of the verses related to the topic and brought that heat. Multi's were popping on both sides. Good shit.