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- Tue May 22, 2012 10:54 am
- Forum: Callout Section
- Topic: Topical. Anyone up?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4170
Re: Topical. Anyone up?
He can't stop looking at you.
- Tue May 22, 2012 12:55 am
- Forum: Callout Section
- Topic: Topical. Anyone up?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4170
Topical. Anyone up?
Anyone up for a Topical vs me?
- Tue May 22, 2012 12:49 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Resent - First Verse
- Replies: 2
- Views: 4028
Resent - First Verse
Not 100% sure if I'm Collabing on this with Synapse or if I'm making a second verse. Either way, this is the first verse and would love some feed on it. [center]Alright, send us to the therapist, Show him we're both crazy as we dress up in our selfishness, Relish in your colors, dig up our fist arra...
- Mon May 21, 2012 11:34 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Feeling fine
- Replies: 6
- Views: 27909
Re: Feeling fine
[center]I always said my mind in this cypher from the start A writer with his Art.. Trying to give what he loves a shot but they got a sniper to my heart... (These four lines tripped me up at first. Although, after reading it a few times - I get the rhythm. Good start As a cool breeze will take my ...
- Wed May 16, 2012 2:40 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
- Replies: 13
- Views: 46834
Re: The Narcissist - MonuMental ft. Kuhlerblynd
[center] MonuMental Many view me as a Narcissist, the truth shouldn't be too far from this, In a booth spit fire, I'm an arsonist, my movements prove that I'm hard to hit, (I'm not exactly a fan of boasting, so please forgive me if I give bad criticism as I don't write in this style. I do like the M...
- Wed May 16, 2012 4:01 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Reminisce
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2508
Re: Reminisce
Yeah I fed 3 pieces so far. 2 of them not entirely in-depth but the last one I disected every line. With the Multi's, I've learned what I like and don't like about Multi's. When I was training myself on writing Multi's, almost full lines and every line would rhyme. I didn't really like the sound of ...
- Wed May 16, 2012 3:04 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Because
- Replies: 8
- Views: 13551
Re: Because
Iv'e grown cold it's known life blocks my spirit,I have a soul of stone (these 2 lines start me off right. Although, if you could enlighten me on what "life blocks my spirit" it would be great. I think I'm thinking of it too broadly though) Numbness holds my bones... (One of those sick lin...
- Tue May 15, 2012 10:03 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Reminisce
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2508
Reminisce
This is my last piece written. Ever since I've had writers block and trying to battle through it. Been 3 weeks now. I've come here for help on Writers block and to grow as an artist, person, and writer. Thank you for reading. Confessions of a silent clown, drip down the sidewalk, The white chalk dre...
- Tue May 15, 2012 10:02 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Trust Issues
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5194
Re: Trust Issues
I like this, it's real and emotional. I don't exactly like the "uh" and "yeah" throughout the whole thing. It'd sound a lot better listened than read. I say for written pieces, you should exclude those and have those when you record. Other than that this piece is real talk. Good ...
- Tue May 15, 2012 10:00 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Addictions.
- Replies: 10
- Views: 7340
Re: Addictions.
This is great. It conveys great emotion and what I like to call "subtle aggression" in some areas. I'd love to hear this recorded as I would understand a few more things about this.
I'm an absolute full fan of Multi's and you did them perfectly - great job. Great read.
I'm an absolute full fan of Multi's and you did them perfectly - great job. Great read.
- Tue May 15, 2012 8:27 am
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: Reminiscent ready to take the next step.
- Replies: 4
- Views: 9613
Reminiscent ready to take the next step.
My name is Reminiscent and my real name is Robert. I go by Ayso, and Convalesce (old stage names I thought were good for me, then I found something that actually fits me). I've always been a writer, I wont go into my huge story. But I've been writing for about a year - now. I write poetically and on...